ALC Blockland Records-1 (Sci-fi Blockland Movie)

[SeventhSandwich]

I don't know what was going to happen with the story, but it was obvious to me the start was meant to be vague because its part of the mystery. Had I wrote this, I would have slowly filled in details as the story progressed. In this case it just wasn't done.

Ambiguity at the beginning of a story is okay, but remember this is supposed to be a movie.

You want your viewers to know the setting.

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[Crêpe]

Ambiguity at the beginning of a story is okay, but remember this is supposed to be a movie.

You want your viewers to know the setting.

it's set in space
thats pretty self explainatory
lol

[Sheath]

it's set in space
thats pretty self explainatory
lol

Yeah lol.

In space. Mysterious ship. What is the problem?

[Böltster]

voice acting was terrible for both of you

your voices sounded completely out of place and emotionless

[Crêpe]

Yeah lol.

In space. Mysterious ship. What is the problem?

gives the view something to ponder over

voice acting was terrible for both of you

your voices sounded completely out of place and emotionless

hue. it's bolster, off course your going to call it silly
lol

Isn't ALC the name you slap on your events

[Böltster]

hue. it's bolster, off course your going to call it silly
lol

i was expecting icy to say this to me, here's icy jr instead! (you even say hue like he does, that's adorable)

my point is valid, voice acting needs work.

[aludane]

my point is valid, voice acting needs work.

It does however it required voice-acting so I did my best.

[Crêpe]

i was expecting icy to say this to me, here's icy jr instead! (you even say hue like he does, that's adorable)

my point is valid, voice acting needs work.

lol
i'm not his offspring

the voice acting could be better, i agree with you there

[SeventhSandwich]

it's set in space
thats pretty self explainatory
lol

No, what I mean is like the setting of the ship.

How big is it?

What color is it?

How fast is it moving?

What objects(planets/stars/etc) are nearby?

[Sheath]

No, what I mean is like the setting of the ship.

How big is it?

What color is it?

How fast is it moving?

What objects(planets/stars/etc) are nearby?

Why do you want these details? They have no relevance. While I agree the story was underdeveloped, your opinion of what an "all inclusive" script should be is really twisted.

I think in this case, you know what you don't like but you don't know what you want. ;3

[SeventhSandwich]

Why do you want these details? They have no relevance.

Because it will make the movie less bad. I can't really describe it any better than that. Everybody else so far has complained about this same issue, so it's probably in your best interest to just correct that.

I think in this case, you know what you don't like but you don't know what you want. ;3

you know what you don't like

• Whatever his name's deep, sophisticated voice is really different than IcyGamma's, and you can hear that Icy recorded his voice with some headset microphone. The quality is different for each voice.
• The names you picked for the characters are your Blockland usernames. Seriously?
• The video effects pasted over Blockland footage looks really cheesy. Like the green glow thing over the bricks.
• The sound effects are really loud and annoying. Especially that howling sound. You can make an alarm sound without deafening your audience.
• The images of the ship in space offer no perspective as to how large the ship is, how fast it is moving, or anything. It looks pretty cheesy too, considering it goes from some weird Terminal screen to videos of Blockland. Maybe you should use the little print icon that has the terminal on it.
• There's no personality to any of the characters. It just sounds like you guys are robots. You should try to express more emotion in your voice acting, or change your characters to robots.

but you don't know what you want. ;3

No, what I mean is like the setting of the ship.

How big is it?

What color is it?

How fast is it moving?

What objects(planets/stars/etc) are nearby?

?

[Sheath]

Because it will make the movie less bad.

Lol what?

Bizarre. You think the script sucked because you weren't told about the name of some nonexistent planet nearby that had nothing to do with the story? You want to know the speed of the ship? Why haha?

Even in a superb script, there is no place for useless details that don't help the story. Do you want to know who painted the ship? What brand of cereal the main character had that morning? Maybe they should break into a song about what temperature the room was cooled to?  

Don't discredit yourself by saying stuff like that.

[Böltster]

Lol what?

Bizarre. You think the script sucked because you weren't told about the name of some nonexistent planet nearby that had nothing to do with the story? You want to know the speed of the ship? Why haha?

Even in a superb script, there is no place for useless details that don't help the story. Do you want to know who painted the ship? What brand of cereal the main character had that morning? Maybe they should break into a song about what temperature the room was cooled to?  

Don't discredit yourself by saying stuff like that.

nice over reacting

this is why you won't go far in the real world, not too good with criticism lol

[Sheath]

not too good with criticism lol

Again, its not my film or script. Seventh's ideals on what a "good" script is are very strange, I'm allowed to dig deeper into any replies I wish. This about what Seventh thinks a good script is, keep up.

[Crêpe]

as usual this topic has turned into an argument
like always

lol