Author Topic: Slender - Da book - WIP  (Read 1662 times)

Made this during writing class at school 1 or 2 days ago, how do you guys like it?
« Last Edit: October 05, 2012, 06:16:34 AM by padmedog »


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SLENDER
BE SCARED TO DEATH
ITS BACK GAMERS





CHAPTER 1


“Faceless”







   I jumped down from the fence in a campground at 2 in the morning with a friend 2 years older than me. We were sneakily trying to find valuable information on the so-called “slender man”.
   The slender man looks like a white man-- faceless but he can see. He distorts recording devices. He wears a suit like a business man with a red tie. He also is tall and has long arms. If you look at him, strange white – come out of his back, then they grab you and pull you toward him. And then he or she dies. Nobody knows how he kills people and how he started. People say their view becomes fizzy like a TV screen on cable without connection. At day-time he blends in tree-like areas where the trees look black and the sky looks white.
   The area is well known for the slender man to come, but it is also the area that has the most information.
   “Let's go to the center,” he told me.
   “Yeah, away from those rangers,” I told him.
I heard loud heartbeats, getting louder as we approached the center.
   “You hear that?” I asked him.
   “The BADUMP-BADUMP sounds? I here those too...” he said while turning around” HOLY – WHAT-WHO IS THAT?!” I looked,”Who is that?!” We saw a white man in a suit faceless starring at us.
   I took out my camera and snapped a picture. Just as the flash went off, he was gone. “What was that?!” I shook “that... that looks like the slender man”.

CHAPTER 2

“Never look back”







We both blinked at the same time and he was there-- right in front of us. “RUN!” I yelled.
   My name is Forrest and my friend's name is Zachary just to let you people know.
   Zachary checked his map while running.
   “Keep running! We're almost to the center!” Zachary said.
   We reached a huge tree bigger than the others, but there was something weird about it, other than being so big. It had a page from a journal or something. It said NEVER LOOK BACK OR IT TAKES YOOUAGH. We looked at each other in great fear.“This is the information. There are 7 more of these papers in this campground. I know this because I have been here and I have seen 8 different pages” Zachary said.
   “Then lets go find them!” I softly announced as if I was happy as I went into the woods.
   “Wait!” Zachary yelled at me. I stopped and looked back.
   “What?” I said. He said, “Its not safe to go alone and don't look back!” he angered at me.
   I turned towards Zachary and we went into the opposite side from where I was going in.

I loving love it.
god damnit
« Last Edit: October 05, 2012, 06:16:47 AM by padmedog »

your writing is pretty bad lol

your writing is pretty bad lol
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also a paragraph does not equal a chapter lol

also a paragraph does not equal a chapter lol
I have more than 12 paragraphs I know

also a paragraph does not equal a chapter lol
pfft.
Why do you think those thick books are hundreds of chapters?

pfft.
Why do you think those thick books are hundreds of chapters?
cant tell if serious. im assuming youre not because youre not known to be stupid

cant tell if serious. im assuming youre not because youre not known to be stupid
I'll just let you know it was a poor joke. :c

cant tell if serious. im assuming youre not because youre not known to be stupid
Moby richard has somewhere near 150 chapters over some 400 500 pages. About 3 pages per chapter.
« Last Edit: October 05, 2012, 06:18:50 PM by Man 2 »