[128x128]Tetragonia - Gee, I am lazy

[PowerDag]

create an ICE CHAIN-SWORD and cautiously open box

[Ad Bot]

[Menen]

But it's shaking!

There are many shaking boxes.

[Yosher]

create an ICE CHAIN-SWORD and cautiously open box

You can't create that...yet.

Cautiously opening the box seems like a good idea to you though. Therefore...



...you open it cautiously.



???: Aaaah! Halt! Who passes here?

Tetro: Uh...it's Tetro.

???: And who might thou be?

Tetro: ...Tetro.

???: Ah, okay then. I'm a member of the Squarriors, a group of fearless knights! Well, we were, until that fiend Reaper attacked...Wait, thou aren't a member of his organization, are thee?!

Tetro: No...I don't even know who Reaper is.

Squarrior: Thou...thou don't? Oh...well, come to our village then. We shall explain everything to thee!

[Moppy]

You really need to work on your victorian english.

>Follow him hence to wherever he may be going.

[Yosher]

You really need to work on your victorian english.

teach me please

[Moppy]

First off,
IT isn't "Thou aren't".
It's "Art thou not".
Also, "Thou don't?" just sounds weird.
Use something like "Thou knowest not?".

[Menen]

http://www.cloudnet.com/~renfest/renspeak.htm

Use this

[Xinakam]

You need to work on your writing in general. Make it sound more fluid, cause right now it doesn't make too much sense. Try saying them out loud to test if it sounds ok. Cause nobody shouts "why" 10 times in a row...

[Menen]

You need to work on your writing in general. Make it sound more fluid, cause right now it doesn't make too much sense. Try saying them out loud to test if it sounds ok. Cause nobody shouts "why" 10 times in a row...

This.

Yosher your writing sounds like a bad Anime. Do what Mak said.

[Yosher]

Yosher your writing sounds like a bad Anime.

I have no idea what this even means but you constantly say it.

[Xinakam]

I have no idea what this even means but you constantly say it.

he means it sounds like anime that has been poorly translated to English. Instead of using regular English slang and informal sentence structures, everything sounds like they're reading from itune's terms and conditions.

So instead of typing like me, where my text has a sorta personality to it...

You type like this sentence. There are no compound sentences. Sentences have repetitive words. It is very difficult to read.

[Menen]

I have no idea what this even means but you constantly say it.

Im pretty sure I've said it once. Maybe twice.

Please learn what "Constantly" means.

[Yosher]

he means it sounds like anime that has been poorly translated to English. Instead of using regular English slang and informal sentence structures, everything sounds like they're reading from itune's terms and conditions.

So instead of typing like me, where my text has a sorta personality to it...

You type like this sentence. There are no compound sentences. Sentences have repetitive words. It is very difficult to read.

Ah, I see. I will try to do that then.

[Moppy]

Name:Goniis Paloh
Skills:
Dimensional Breach(passive): He has the ability to use the third dimension, allowing for real 3d sideways attacks. He still has access to the 2nd dimension.
Side Swipe: He extends his 3D Arm (His Left Arm) and does a horozontal swipe with it.
UP-DOWN Smash: He extends his 2D arm (His right Arm)upwards and smashes it down toward his opponent.
Gyro Scooper: He floats up into the air, then spins his arms around, his 3d arm horizontally, and his 2d arm vertically.
Quarter Mile Jab: He flies into the background and extends his arm to jab anyone out there.
Toss: He can pick up and toss things from the background and whatever's in reach.
Weapon:His Arms and whatever he can find to throw at his enemies.
Personality:His original personality has disintigrated when he was recreated. He is now has very few personality traits except for being extremely zealous toward his goal, and is completely unremorseful if someone gets in his way. In a way, he is very robotic.
Backstory: (Because I feel like it, okay?) In some place in a hidden place apart from civilization, there is a secret lab filled with scientists creating weapons. A few years ago, a life form was brought in on the brink of death. No one knew his name or appearance aside from the scentists he was brought to. Over the next few months they experimented and tested with new "Poly-Technology". Soon, when the tests were over and the tech was fully functional, a new being under the code name of Goniis Paloh had emerged.
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[Yosher]

Name:Goniis Paloh
Skills:
Dimensional Breach(passive): He has the ability to use the third dimension, allowing for real 3d sideways attacks. He still has access to the 2nd dimension.
Side Swipe: He extends his 3D Arm (His Left Arm) and does a horozontal swipe with it.
UP-DOWN Smash: He extends his 2D arm (His right Arm)upwards and smashes it down toward his opponent.
Gyro Scooper: He floats up into the air, then spins his arms around, his 3d arm horizontally, and his 2d arm vertically.
Toss: He can pick up and toss things from the background and whatever's in reach.
Weapon:His Arms and whatever he can find to throw at his enemies.
Personality:His original personality has disintigrated when he was recreated. He is now has very few personality traits except for being extremely zealous toward his goal, and is completely unremorseful if someone gets in his way. In a way, he is very robotic.
Backstory: (Because I feel like it, okay?) In some place in a hidden place apart from civilization, there is a secret lab filled with scientists creating weapons. A few years ago, a life form was brought in on the brink of death. No one knew his name or appearance aside from the scentists he was brought to. Over the next few months they experimented and tested with new "Poly-Technology". Soon, when the tests were over and the tech was fully functional, a new being under the code name of Goniis Paloh had emerged.

eh...
i'm not sure on this one

Also people, submit characters again. When character submissions REALLY end, I'll choose some characters out of all submissions and those will be really accepted.