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Author Topic: [128x128]Tetragonia - Gee, I am lazy  (Read 14441 times)

Aw.
How can I alter it so that it becomes more acceptable?

it looks like more of an object than a being.

so try making it look more like a being

it looks like more of an object than a being.

so try making it look more like a being
Not sure what you mean by this. It's already got a vaguely humanoid body with limbs and means of transportation.
Do I give it eyes and a mouth, or what?

Do I give it eyes and a mouth, or what?

yeah, something like this

Let's resprite that real quick, shall we?

DAAANG.
THAT LOOKS BEAUTIFUL!

I'm not sure how he'll be able to break that down and use it.
other than that it's really cool

I'm not sure how he'll be able to break that down and use it.
other than that it's really cool
I just outlined it so you could see the hands on the white post. Here's the original sprite:


once again sorry for not updating
i'll update
after taking a shower

mak 'das cool but it doesn't really fit yosher's format
i might make a mix of both versions but after homework

(yeah i'm not going to use that whole thou-business anymore, i'm not going to spend a day learning a new accent

You finally arrive at the village...also looking completely destroyed and dull.

Squarrior: I have brought another brave fighter, comrades! I've also brought Rectri back!

Squarrior crowd: Wait a minute...He looks a lot like...get the mayor!

A few minutes later...



Mayor: Alright alright, stop pushing now, what's all the ruckus about? What's that, you say? This man might be the man the legend spoke of? You...you're right! The item he is holding is indeed the magic paintbrush, so there is no doubt that he is the man of the legend! ALRIGHT, SQUARRIORS! LEAVE ME ALONE WITH THESE TWO, I NEED TO HAVE A TALK WITH THEM!

Tetro: Uh...I'm not sure what's going on here, but-

Mayor: No no, don't worry. Please, let us go through this doorway here. I will explain everything to you while we're walking.



Mayor: The Squarrior that you found has told me everything. That you are in need of information. Well, let me start by explaining who Reaper is.

Reaper is a man who has plans to completely erase this world. Litterally. You are in possession of an item called the Magic Paintbrush, right? Well, he's in possession of an item called the Magic Eraser. It has the power to erase matter in this dimension, Tetragonia. He wants to erase the world and obtain the Magic Paintbrush so he can create a new one to his liking. The thing is: the Magic Paintbrush is the only item that can undo the effects of the Magic Eraser. Apart from being an item used for magic, it can also be used to create matter. There is a legend that says that only the one whose body is shaped like a square pyramid is able to wield it properly. Ever since we have discovered this legend, we have protected the Magic PaintbrushDid you feel something when you touched the Magic Paintbrush?

Tetro: Yeah, I felt knowledge streaming into my head. It felt enlightening.

Mayor: Well, that means you are indeed the only one who is able to stop Reaper. As you can maybe see, our town has already been half-erased. The colors have all been undone. Reaper has put a Blanco Seal on this town and the general area around it, so the effects can't be undone by the colors in the area around the town. Now, you have the power to remove the Blanco Seal and restore our town, but you have not mastered it yet. Ah, we've arrived at the spot.



Tetro: Hey, this place still has all its colors. How come?

Mayor: Because this place is sacred and is far too powerful for Reaper to take over...but not for long. His power keeps growing tremendously and he needs to be stopped. To master the art of the Magic Paintbrush, you need to collect three sacred items that Reaper's minions stole: The Ruby Flower, the Emerald Stone, and the Cobalt Gear. These are the things you need to master it. They have been spread over three areas that reach just outside the Blanco Seal Reaper put on this land: a grassland called Mineral Meadows, a large mine and a factory used by Reaper for weapons for his minions. See that pedestal over there? It looks like the Ruby Flower would fit in there. This might be very shocking for you, the fact that you're the only one who can save this world, but I beg of you! Please stop Reaper!

Tetro: Well...if I'm really the only one...I guess I have to do this.

Mayor: Thank you...I shall stay here and wait for your return.



Well, you have learned the truth. It has completely turned your world upside down and well, you're not sure what to do next. So what do you do next? It's best to stay in town for a little while to prepare. You can go buy items you might need, and such. You can also just decide to immideatly go to the Mineral Meadows, your first destination. What do you do?

Okay, I've got a few renditions of Goniis Pallo with eyes and mouth.
Version 1

Straight up eyes, and straight up mouth. Not much more to it.
Version 2

He's got a sort of vision port where his eyes slide around in. It goes all the way around his head. Wherever he may want to look around his head, he can slide his eyes around, like so:




Do you like any of these, Yosher?

i like version 2 very much

Sweet. I modified his character page accordingly.

Name:Goniis Paloh
Skills:
Dimensional Breach(passive): He has the ability to use the third dimension, allowing for real 3d sideways attacks. He still has access to the 2nd dimension.
Side Swipe: He extends his 3D Arm (His Left Arm) and does a horozontal swipe with it.
UP-DOWN Smash: He extends his 2D arm (His right Arm)upwards and smashes it down toward his opponent.
Gyro Scooper: He floats up into the air, then spins his arms around, his 3d arm horizontally, and his 2d arm vertically.
Quarter Mile Jab: He flies into the background and extends his arm to jab anyone out there.
Toss: He can pick up and toss things from the background and whatever's in reach.
Weapon:His Arms and whatever he can find to throw at his enemies.
Personality:His original personality has disintigrated when he was recreated. He is now has very few personality traits except for being extremely zealous toward his goal, and is completely unremorseful if someone gets in his way. In a way, he is very robotic.
Backstory: (Because I feel like it, okay?) In some place in a hidden place apart from civilization, there is a secret lab filled with scientists creating weapons. A few years ago, a life form was brought in on the brink of death. No one knew his name or appearance aside from the scentists he was brought to. Over the next few months they experimented and tested with new "Poly-Technology". Soon, when the tests were over and the tech was fully functional, a new being under the code name of Goniis Paloh had emerged.
Extra Sprites:
Looking left:
Looking right: