Author Topic: The "Observance"  (Read 2198 times)

Small flak frigate.
My first spacecraft.
Armed with 6 AA Guns.
I'm accepting 1/10 ratings.
NOTE: Thinking of renaming it, Also, engines turning on/off don't work because I can't event for stuff.
The ship with guns on full automatic:

The back of the ship.

First floor hallway housing the beds for the crew.

Second floor hallway

Medical bay, Note the cross on the wall

The Cafeteria

Armory

The ship is sortof too small to be anything with heavy guns, but too big to NOT have guns or to be a fighter, so I made it a flak frigate (Anti Aircraft Light Frigate)
And if there is anything I can do better or do the right way don't hesitate to tell me,
I can only get better by knowing what can be improved/fixed.
« Last Edit: November 02, 2012, 03:48:24 PM by Mr. T_T »

Good try, but it lacks any interior design. play around with different ideas, look at others builds for inspiration. Also try to refrain from using ramps for spaceships, it just doesn't look good 90% of the time. The front cabin is also too transparent, honestly it looks as if someone could smash it with a punch. However the engine was nicely done in my opinion compared to the rest of the build.

Also I like the name, i think you should keep it.

maybe.... 5.5/10? i haven't really got enough experience to rate others stuff so don't take that rating seriously.

And try making the fuselage more interesting to look at, it just looks like some duped ramps at the moment.

But it's still pretty good for your first, honestly my first attempt at a spaceship was 1x1 red bricks spammed into a cube with transparent bricks here and there.
« Last Edit: November 02, 2012, 04:08:08 PM by D3ATH LORD »

Good try, but it lacks any interior design. play around with different ideas, look at others builds for inspiration. Also try to refrain from using ramps for spaceships, it just doesn't look good 90% of the time. The front cabin is also too transparent, honestly it looks as if someone could smash it with a punch. However the engine was nicely done in my opinion compared to the rest of the build.

Also I like the name, i think you should keep it.

maybe.... 5.5/10? i haven't really got enough experience to rate others stuff so don't take that rating seriously.

And try making the fuselage more interesting to look at, it just looks like some duped ramps at the moment.

But it's still pretty good for your first, honestly my first attempt at a spaceship was 1x1 red bricks spammed into a cube with transparent bricks here and there.
Thanks for the tips
Also, the front glass is supposed to be like that
Like just a glass dome for the front.

it looks as if someone could smash it with a punch.
Hfhasbgsuygtdysg
Dome roosterpits are completely ok imo :|

Hfhasbgsuygtdysg
Dome roosterpits are completely ok imo :|

it feels too... glassy, if you know what i mean. It needs some sort of steel rods going across the side, like
simply painting grey lines along the middle would make me happy


Has my building improved at least?
Something I made when I was a noob:

Has my building improved at least?
Something I made when I was a noob:
-snip-
Yes, your building improved. BUT I would add more interior detail like food in the cafeteria and add some other weapons so it doesnt look boring.
« Last Edit: November 02, 2012, 05:51:57 PM by king cool »

focus on aesthetic more than function until you can get it looking somewhat decent then you can make it have useful stuff and functions
3/10


Also try to refrain from using ramps for spaceships
If he just build a giant block you would say it was too blocky, im sorry but spaceship builds normally have ramps in them, alot.

Hfhasbgsuygtdysg
Dome roosterpits are completely ok imo :|
No. You don't get a say in the glass roosterpit.  :cookieMonster:

Other than that, I think it looks like it would be a breaching ship.


I'm accepting 1/10 ratings.

Okay. 1/10

Ontopic: Needs some work to make more advanced.
« Last Edit: November 03, 2012, 03:50:03 PM by Angry Bull »

holy snake

im sorry
« Last Edit: November 03, 2012, 11:40:52 PM by Alpaka »