https://soundcloud.com/youngrotations/new-song-preview
Not made a song in quite a while and i whipped this up in a few hours, let me know what you think about it!
Who DOESN'T read tags?
So a few major points of critique. (my opinion only, but I'll state it as facts anyway)
Firstly, the whole thing feels quite sparse. I think that you could use some more synths or bass or something; nothing too intrusive but a bit more background.
Second, the guitar chords never hit the root notes. Once again this could be solved with a bass of some sort.
Thirdly, the sidechaining is way too strong at the end.
Finally, the melody feels like it's in a different key than the chords at the end as well.
