4/10
i did not like
- the concept of the video
-> blockland can't fail to get onto steam, it's just put on a waiting list. i also doubt that badspot would get mad that it wasn't green-lit because he knows when it will, as he can track Blockland's current position on the list.
- the hud showing
-> in options, there are toggles to turning off the hud entirely.
- the odd camera movement at the start
-> hit escape and change your character without moving the camera for a more smooth look.
- the bad audio quality
-> i'm not sure where you found the sound, but you may want to look for a cleaner version of it.
- the audio jumping volume because it was repeated
-> cut the audio at a point where, when it is repeated, it won't jump awkwardly.
- number of times the audio repeats
-> 10-12 seconds seems a bit long for this.
- the fraps mark
-> i believe you can get the free trial of
Camtasia, but i'm not sure whether it has a watermark or not.
i did like
- the quality of the video (when put in 720p)
- the explosion at the end of the video (nice touch)
- the use of the audio (made sense)
- the intentions of the video