Like what for example?
I think you're a great builder Demian, and you have contributed a lot to the community, and my rating isn't personal. I think you can do better.
I guess it needs more unstable terrain.. it is sand after all.
You should think about maybe adding a market place?
definatly use some platescape terrain and make it look awesome. also think about getting a colour set which uses different beige colours. I guess I could give you the one I am currently using as its private and was built for SPO's Western RP..
Nice work, I see potential in the WIP. I also like the graves :)