goddamnit
brotatoe please understand a tdm is more than just a neat idea; it has to present that idea in a well-designed fashion
yes, this is appealing to the eyes but playing-wise it doesn't have anything different than putting down four 64x baseplates in a cube and sticking an aligned-cubescape "volcano" in the center.
I know you're still learning, and I understand why you're hyped (or ecstactic or w/e) about this build; i was the same three-four years ago, with my
Strategic Riverside TDM and
Convoy Ambush Reverse CTF. I wasn't receptive to criticism and didn't see how my build was bad, but looking back on them I can see a lot of things that could use improvement.
It's a phase, and it takes time to get out of it. Don't worry too much about criticism, but be accepting of it and try at least to consider it and criticize your own builds.