Brian* and Hyaku's SPACESHIP TDM [Beta]

[Hyaku.]

If thats the case, then post more screenshots or a youtube video of gameplay so we can judge it.

Good idea.
I'll make one after the next version, I have a few improvement ideas.

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[Hyaku.]

Yeah ill try to get that done

[Igloos]

looks pretty bad

How would you feel if someone called your jail RP bad? It isn't special anyway, it's ordinary.
I like this build, it's purely simple.

[The Brighter Dark]

How would you feel if someone called your jail RP bad? It isn't special anyway, it's ordinary.

I would wonder what about it you did not like, and would ask you to elaborate so i could fix it. And on that note, do tell. I would love to improve the experience for all my players.

[Igloos]

I would wonder what about it you did not like, and would ask you to elaborate so i could fix it. And on that note, do tell. I would love to improve the experience for all my players.

 

Ok I have a suggestion, don't make a jailRP.

[The Brighter Dark]

That's really not very helpful. I can make what ever type of server i wish, and if your going to troll and not give anything but empty criticism, your not doing anyone any good.

[PaintsForum]

Don't worry about Brighter, everything looks bad when compared to what he builds regularly.

[Hyaku.]

I would wonder what about it you did not like, and would ask you to elaborate so i could fix it. And on that note, do tell. I would love to improve the experience for all my players.

First off, its too huge. There are sections I will never ever see even if I get all the keys as a cop. (Assuming I can find any keys in the maze of vents that are comparable in size to most standard jails.)

How would you feel if someone called your jail RP bad? It isn't special anyway, it's ordinary.
I like this build, it's purely simple.

Why thank you sir.

Don't worry about Brighter, everything looks bad when compared to what he builds regularly.

To that I say:
Buuuurn!

[PaintsForum]

First off, its too huge. There are sections I will never ever see even if I get all the keys as a cop. (Assuming I can find any keys in the maze of vents that are comparable in size to most standard jails.)

Why thank you sir.

To that I say:
Buuuurn!

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[AdinX]

looks pretty bad

This.


It's not that brighter is better, and believe me we build together, we're on par. We don't take our skills into account. If it looks bad, it looks bad. We can base our opinion on stills just as easily as we can a server description or from players talking about it.

Your topic format is kinda bad too, specifically the fact that you keep directly uploading pictures. Add in some color and use size variations. Use actual quotes.

[Operator¹]

this is essentially the content of the entire map

[AdinX]

Now that's an eyesore

[The Brighter Dark]

Some things to help make this better:

Wall variation
Colors that are not opposite on the color wheel
More realistic layout
Side rooms
Weapon classes
Better objectives
Alternate roughs, such as vents, back rooms, teleporters
More space themed props
Cover in the hallways

[Hyaku.]

This was just v1, but in thinking of something we can do for v2.
I'm thinking ship to ship combat with a connector tube running across

[AdinX]

This was just v1, but in thinking of something we can do for v2.
I'm thinking ship to ship combat with a connector tube running across

If this is your idea of a V1, I honestly hope you skip to V12 so it's not complete crap :I
Honestly, I stopped by for a little less than two minutes, the build quite literally gave me a headache. If you're going to make a space build, especially on ships, you need to have large hallways that lead to rooms with high ceilings, but that doesn't mean you can throw detail out the window. Your building a space-fairing vessel, not a one room beach shack. Have panels on walls, computer terminals, have wiring beneath the floor and cover it with grates, have bay windows, make it not so bland.

Though this really probably won't help you, here's a Space Station that some friends and I were working on a while ago:





Build your ships with interiors like that. You have the right idea with your walls, but you just don't seem to fully grasp everything between floor and ceiling. Everything in a ship does not glow unless it's alien tech / you want to blind the entire crew.

I'm not trying to be mean or anything, don't get me wrong. I love that you want to host and I'm glad your trying, and it warms my heart knowing that your planning whole entire VERSIONS... But if you're gonna update, do it right please. Make something that's more of a hallway instead of some eye-cancer build that consists of a couple hallways and a bunch of people running around with guns.