Xombiezone: Iced

[padmedog]

No, I have NOT asked Theportalmaster if I could make this.
Its supposed to be just like it and I've-- oh and its a game. Its supposed to be just like it, but also its an MMO, you've got a temperature, character sheets, body-based health, and a bunch more stuff. I only have the menu done so far except the fact that I don't have the title I asked for yet from Theportalmaster.

[Ad Bot]

[Operator¹]

i'm choking on the menu

[padmedog]

i'm choking on the menu

..
Um
Yeah it might seem a bit bad quality, what can I do to help it (unless that's not what you meant)

[Banana]

It would look much better if you moved the buttons apart, straightened the text within them, possibly even changed the button layout to a more simplistic style, and added a logo in the top right corner.
A large, high-res logo. And I'd probably add a nicer background as well.

But now I just complained about everything you've done so far, which is douchey.
It looks pretty decent. Does the snow move? If not - it really needs to.

But there's no gameplay right now, is there?

[Xolerate²]

Sigh...

i'm choking on the menu

[Yosher]

i'm choking on the menu

[padmedog]

It would look much better if you moved the buttons apart, straightened the text within them, possibly even changed the button layout to a more simplistic style, and added a logo in the top right corner.
A large, high-res logo. And I'd probably add a nicer background as well.

But now I just complained about everything you've done so far, which is douchey.
It looks pretty decent. Does the snow move? If not - it really needs to.

But there's no gameplay right now, is there?

I'm working on that right now + waiting for Theportalmaster to give me a plain logo without any other text... unless there is an easy way to recreate it.
PS: Those words are actually shaking.

[Doughboy]

Surely you would ask to use the name before you made the title?

[padmedog]

Surely you would ask to use the name before you made the title?

Did he copyright it...? By the looks of the title I don't think he did.

[padmedog]

Hey, is this any better? (Should I still change the jiggle of the buttons?)

[Electrk]

If you put a (C) after something, it's automatically copyrighted

[Electrk]

Put the buttons in the center instead of off to the side

[padmedog]

If you put a (C) after something, it's automatically copyrighted

I don't see a "C" in it.

Put the buttons in the center instead of off to the side

Okay.

[padmedog]

Like this?

[Theportalmaster]

I would appreciate you use a different name for your game. There are thousands of title possibilities and I don't really see why this would be needed for your game. I don't technically own the name Winter Bite, but if you are going to blatantly copy it at least use your own logo.