The story is terrible now, but it can be fixed.
On May 16, 2014, an artificial drug called Fultrum was created by FutureTech. The following day, the product was unveiled worldwide as something that would enhance normal day to day activities by 50%<-(Find a better way to state this, 50% sounds awkward.). Many people were excited by this product but some were not pleased. Doctor Conner Shawn was disappointed that the machine did not show that he created it and on the shipping he injected a virus into the machine that infected other machines that were at that point being shipped globally.<-(Find a better way to state this as well, "He injected it with a virus because the machine didn't reflect his work" doesn't make sense.) On May 21, the drug was tested by many people, causing their skin to transform (Into what?) and their brain to deteriorate. The people started to infect other people as people killed each other spreading paranoia all over the world. A group of military personal created ICC "Infection Containment Control" which was to help clean up this mess but then bandits and criminals started to attack people and kill much survivors and ICC members. As people fought all over the world a group of survivors in Sweden hide out from this infection and try to survive with there life's as the infection moves..... you choose your way of survival.....
The story's backbones aren't good, so I just fixed some technical issues.
The underlined part is what I did nothing to (Not because it was perfect, but because I think you should do those by yourself, being the creator.)
The build looks nice.
