Author Topic: Requesting website review  (Read 754 times)

I have developed a website that (If you guys have the time) I would like to get reviewed.

The URL is http://www.vaughansdesign.com.

I think I uploaded the site before but it has been updated a lot since then. Accepting all criticism.

That style has been done to death. It looks too clean.

it's pretty boring and it looks like you just have a template that you then swap the image out on .. the one in your portfolio is the same thing but with a red D

No it is not a template and yeah the portfolio is a high priority thing I need to sort out

I don't mean to criticize you heavily, but this looks like it is meant to be a professional website, so there is some quality people look for..

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Search Engine Optimisation
It's a word but it's very unfamiliar to a lot of people

There is also some grammar issues and punctuation needed in places like
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A website is more than just an additional source of income it's an essential in business.

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website url: http://www.young-explorers.org.uk
Could look more professional like this :

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Website URL : http://www.young-explorers.org.uk

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that you didn't want to be index
Should become "that you didn't want to be indexed"

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danboii96 is a personal site with latest information about the danboii96 game servers, this site was made using ASP and includes dynamic pages and a jquery slideshow.

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Danboii96 is a personal site with the latest information about Danboii96's game servers. This site was made using ASP and includes dynamic pages as well as a JQuery slideshow.

You should also test your websites on mobile browsers such as Browser (Android), Skyfire, Chrome (mobile), etc. and mention it.


I think "optimisation" is a word but most people aren't familiar with it
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(SEO) Search engine optimisation

"How do I do Search Engine Optimization" could be "How do I setup my website for Search Engine Optimization"

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All you employees

Instead of "All your employees"

You should include a lot more description in your More Info on the plans available.

The Contact page could also look more professional and organized

The background isn't very appealing and welcoming being just white.
« Last Edit: May 26, 2013, 09:21:04 PM by Pacnet2012³ »

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that you didn’t want to be index

looks like a template and or/ built with website builder.

looks like a template and or/ built with website builder.

It was built with visual web developer and its all my own code however I was inspired by apple.com's navigation bar.
« Last Edit: May 26, 2013, 09:26:19 PM by DANBOII96 »

what's visual web developer

The design is top notch, I do like a nice clean layout. One thing bugs me: I think the navigation links should be white and go grey on hover, the inverse as it is now. Oh and the content div should be dynamic and not have a fixed height, all that blank between the content and footer is annoying.

I think "optimisation" is a word but most people aren't familiar with it

It's the correct spelling here in the UK.
« Last Edit: May 26, 2013, 09:34:52 PM by Fluff-is-back »

what's visual web developer

Its an IDE for website design that was developed by microsoft.

And I'd like to thank all of you for the feedback :D, keep em coming!

The more I can improve this thing the better.