!CIPE: New Drum & Bass Song!

[BluetoothBoy]

Here's my latest. Am I improving?

http://audiotool.com/track/cipe

http://soundcloud.com/lloid-1/cipe

EDIT: Updated and finalized!

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[BluetoothBoy]

Wow, nothing? All I want is a little feedback... D:

[Marcem]

the "wub" synth gets a little annoying because it never stops.  It's also pretty bland, try new things with the genre, instead of the plain old jungle format that's been around the past few years.

[BluetoothBoy]

I do agree with you a bit on the synth. And I'm trying to be more original; and I'm succeeding. It's just slow progress.

Also, it turns out that my main focus for this song was improving my drum work. Still, thanks for the feedback.