Author Topic: Lyrics help.  (Read 1850 times)

So i need some help with some creative lyrics for a song i'm trying to write for a friendwink wink nudge nudge
Here are the lyrics I have so far.
Quote
:Verse 1:
I'm lost on a lonley road.
Where I'm going,no body knows.
I am finding my way home.
My et-a is un-kown.

:Chorus:
Nobody cares, about the shadow.
Nobody cares, what happens to me.
I know I will find my way home.
But that long journey will be made by me.
I need like 2-3 more verses and I already have the ending. I suspect I'll throw a riff in somewhere but I just need lyrics to work on getting there. If anyone has any legitimate suggestions please let me know.



i ain't gonna let it get to me, i'm just gonna creep
down in Pumpkin Hill, i gotsta find my lost piece
i know that it's here, i can sense it in my feet
the great emerald's power allows me to feel
i can't see a thing, but it's around somewhere
i'm gonna hold my head 'cause i have no fear



it's hard to get an idea of what you want without some kind of rhythm or sound to work with

it's hard to get an idea of what you want without some kind of rhythm or sound to work with
Yeah I realized that. A friend made me record the first verse and chorus for them. Would you like to hear it?

Yeah I realized that. A friend made me record the first verse and chorus for them. Would you like to hear it?

yes

yes
This scares me. My voice is shot enough as it is. I don't really need to hear about it from others.

This scares me. My voice is shot enough as it is. I don't really need to hear about it from others.

its ok i wont laugh at you i promise



Aw come on, your voice is fine. The song is cool too.

song is too loud, can't hear your voice that well. but not bad
But I do agree here.

Lower the guitar and raise your voice.

song is too loud, can't hear your voice that well. but not bad
I noticed that it was loud. I just didnt want to sing it again.
Aw come on, your voice is fine. The song is cool too.
Thanks.

hnnnnnnngggg

Well, your voice is interesting. (It isn't bad, but I can see why you call it "shot")

The song is sort of weird for the audience you're writing to. If you're writing this song for a friend, friend that you want to make your girlfriend, or your girlfriend, the lyrics sound sort of depressing.


I don't know the full story however.
The guitar was really nice though.

Well, your voice is interesting. (It isn't bad, but I can see why you call it "shot")
Thanks.
I don't know the full story however.
That's for another time when I'm done pouting about it.
Edit: Does anyone have any lyrics ideas then that fit with this song? It'd have to be like the first verse I need 2 different new verses for it and my mind is blank.
« Last Edit: July 03, 2013, 08:08:33 PM by AirGlider »

i ain't gonna let it get to me, i'm just gonna creep
down in Pumpkin Hill, i gotsta find my lost piece
i know that it's here, i can sense it in my feet
the great emerald's power allows me to feel
i can't see a thing, but it's around somewhere
i'm gonna hold my head 'cause i have no fear



it's hard to get an idea of what you want without some kind of rhythm or sound to work with
i love you
here let me try

Echidona, that's what I'm representing,
Never seen a mic-hog spit like a menace.
Wild Canyon fun? I gotta chase a bat, huh,
Yeah, Rouge, she's lovey and smooth!
A double cross spot-thief, that's out for my jewels,
I'm feelin' her in mysterious ways.
That's why I stay on point like every single day,
I gotta protect this place, I do it for my race, uh, uh.

Yeah, you know how it is,
Yo, yo,
Uh (uh),
Throw your hands up, come on, come on.

Ain't nobody gonna come here and eat my plate, no!
Yo what happened, my Emeralds' gone!
Somebody gonna get their's quick, my word sworn,
Who could'a did this, that stitch named Rouge!
When I catch her, Imm'l get her with these tools,
There you are, come here you little thief!
Think you gon' fly and get away quick? Uh, uh!
Give up the Emeralds or die, I don't love you!