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Author Topic: Mini Temple  (Read 1671 times)

« Last Edit: July 19, 2013, 06:07:02 PM by Zenix »

There are many things wrong with this build.

My first tip is to use larger bricks. Never use 1x1 bricks to build walls; they are what people would call "Spammy".
Try to make something much bigger than this. You can't add any details when it's this small.

Also, don't use the baseplate's color as the floor of the temple. It should have a different floor.
Add more colors instead of just one gray.
The zombie doesn't really make sense in this building as well, and the exterior of the temple is bland and awkward-looking.

It's a decent start, but there are many things to improve on.

umm
okay... looks nice.

There are many things wrong with this build.

My first tip is to use larger bricks. Never use 1x1 bricks to build walls; they are what people would call "Spammy".
Try to make something much bigger than this. You can't add any details when it's this small.

Also, don't use the baseplate's color as the floor of the temple. It should have a different floor.
Add more colors instead of just one gray.
The zombie doesn't really make sense in this building as well, and the exterior of the temple is bland and awkward-looking.

It's a decent start, but there are many things to improve on.
the zombies are for fun and minigames
the ground looks awesome with the temple
and i updated it so...
redownload it
its alot better
« Last Edit: July 19, 2013, 06:13:33 PM by Zenix »

Start a server, I can scale-up this build for ya (make a blockhead-size version)

Quote from: Hotspot
meh, needs a whole re-do
I sort of agree, so I guess I can help him with that.
« Last Edit: July 19, 2013, 11:58:12 PM by ßlöükfáce »

meh, needs a whole re-do

Start a server, I can scale-up this build for ya (make a blockhead-size version
Sure! whats your BL_ID



Well, Haters Gonna Hate

if you're just going to take that attitude your building skill will definitely not improve.
accept criticism and understand that these comments are directed to help you. in most cases they include some criticial emotion but just ignore that because that's how we roll at the forums.

Well, Haters Gonna Hate

hate 
/hāt/
Verb
Feel intense or passionate dislike for (someone): "the boys hate each other".
Noun
Intense or passionate dislike: "feelings of hate".
Synonyms
verb.     detest - abhor - loathe - abominate - execrate - dislike
noun.     hatred - odium - abhorrence - detestation - loathing
[ohsht how do i do a line again]
crit·i·cism 
/ˈkritəˌsizəm/
Noun

    The expression of disapproval of someone or something based on perceived faults or mistakes: "he ignored the criticisms of his friends".
    The brown townysis and judgment of a literary or artistic work: "methods of criticism supported by literary theories".

Synonyms
critique - censure - review - animadversion
[ohsht how2line]
Nobody here was "hating" on you.

It needs more detail, add ruins, take rid of the walls, add some destroyed houses, sculptures, and a plaza.

you only used 1 shade of grey, for old temples, I recommend using green, beige, and grey.


Recommended brick packs:

Vertical Print Plates

Small Ramps Pack

Pole Adapters

horizontal poles

hate 
/hāt/
Verb
Feel intense or passionate dislike for (someone): "the boys hate each other".
Noun
Intense or passionate dislike: "feelings of hate".
Synonyms
verb.     detest - abhor - loathe - abominate - execrate - dislike
noun.     hatred - odium - abhorrence - detestation - loathing
[ohsht how do i do a line again]
crit·i·cism 
/ˈkritəˌsizəm/
Noun

    The expression of disapproval of someone or something based on perceived faults or mistakes: "he ignored the criticisms of his friends".
    The brown townysis and judgment of a literary or artistic work: "methods of criticism supported by literary theories".

Synonyms
critique - censure - review - animadversion
[ohsht how2line]
Nobody here was "hating" on you.
What the hell is wrong with you

Everybody did terrible
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