God dammit.
When I was reading this, I heard a noise behind me. Stupid mice...
I should get an exterminator. :I
But yeah, it would be good as a creepypasta if it could be a little more longer, fixed the flaws, and maybe cut out the FBI part... Seriously, one I read just went total hay stuff with rendy ripping out lungs and hearts of FBI and the Army, before that it was creepy... It was not good at the end, 7/10 beginning and mid-story, and 1/10 ending for that. For this... 4/10, maybe 5.