Feedback on my music?

[Mik3ry]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BLwn3QtiUcc

The intro is weak as hell, and a little blip of vocals forgets up the kick and the snare for the intro, but the rest is fine. I was just curious if this sound style is taken well or not

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[Mik3ry]

Bump

[Katadeus]

Was going to provide feedback, but youtube's telling me that it doesn't exist.
You also might want to consider waiting longer than 10 minutes before bumping.

[Mik3ry]

Was going to provide feedback, but youtube's telling me that it doesn't exist.
You also might want to consider waiting longer than 10 minutes before bumping.

well forget, i should prolly test my links stuffe

fixed

[Katadeus]

Writing feedback as I go through it.
Could use less detune.
Buildup to drop too simple, not enough happening
all of a sudden, dunkey makes everything better.
Composition still poor.
Vocals are poorly timed when you're just using "forget" and echoing it, which is kinda major.
Second buildup and drop are exactly the same, which would be ok I guess if it was more satisfying or complicated at least.
The synth that comes in after the drop is just way out of character of the piece.

[Mik3ry]

Writing feedback as I go through it.
Could use less detune.
Buildup to drop too simple, not enough happening
all of a sudden, dunkey makes everything better.
Composition still poor.
Vocals are poorly timed when you're just using "forget" and echoing it, which is kinda major.
Second buildup and drop are exactly the same, which would be ok I guess if it was more satisfying or complicated at least.
The synth that comes in after the drop is just way out of character of the piece.

Thanks man, the vocals being poorly timed was easier to spot when I was listening for them, so thanks a lot about that. Also, everything else you said was pretty accurate.
Thanks man, I haven't really looked into actual arrangement and anything other

[Nasoa]

yeah 400% better with dunkey

need a bubberducky remix

[Katadeus]

Thanks man, the vocals being poorly timed was easier to spot when I was listening for them, so thanks a lot about that. Also, everything else you said was pretty accurate.
Thanks man, I haven't really looked into actual arrangement and anything other

no problem
Few people take heavy criticism so well around here in particular.

Hope you continue, as music is a great hobby

yeah 400% better with dunkey

need a bubberducky remix

Recently I met someone in League named The Bubber Ducky or Bubber Ducky, I can't remember which

[ßlöükfáce]

My feedback "forget forget forget forget forget" in other words pretty neat.

Also you forgot to link this one http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xfZsIovB5cs

[*[-Karli-]*]

I think it could use some filtering on the wobble bass, or down an octave.