Author Topic: my first homemade movie  (Read 2681 times)

i made this a couple of hours ago. it took me about 4 days to make.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OTXJB6HqWDo

please rate it.



"just put the knife down!"
gets shot.

uhm

You expect me to sit through 12 minutes of this?

what the forget

I think Birdemic just got new competition!

i lost interest before the first minute
you need to add some sort of hook to keep viewers interested lol

thats a few minutes of my life ill never get back.   .___.  ill reserve my next  :cookie: for something else.

i know this isnt as funny to you guys because there are a lot of jokes you wouldnt understand since you wernt in the Mclardass group.

"just put the knife down!"
gets shot.

uhm
ya i added the gun scene 2 days after i wrote the knife part.
to lazy to change.


i know this isnt as funny to you guys because there are a lot of jokes you wouldnt understand since you wernt in the Mclardass group.
then whyd you post it to us in the first place

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Controversially, the best movie ever seen

-LA Times

When I first saw this topic, I thought the original poster meant some sort of other type of movie.

then whyd you post it to us in the first place
cuz i love it like a child and i wanted to share it with the world


um lets start at the beginning


ok, a cow,keyboard,golden gun, and a knife, and a tux

so what are you trying to tell the viewer? your a group of computer nerds that are also part of some gang organization that also live in rural areas while dressing formally? Did you throw all of your favorite things together in a pile and say "aw yeah ma fav stuff is so kewl" its like if you were to take all your favorite food and mix them together, it would look like stuff. Stick with one thing for your cover and not clutter it with everything

First thing i notice is the horrendous red font. A Mclardass production no where on the intro cover does that look good. I know red and green are complimentary colors but this looks so unfitting(then again almost everything in unfitting in the pic) compared with the surrounding text. Then after being slammed in the face with the red text i read the McLardass's name. Oh cool metallic font with a drop shadow type effect i would see in a dubstep video. Seeing this is like having a ugly person stand next to a runway model, it only makes the surrounding text look 10x as bad.

advice: stick with a theme for your fonts

4/10 you at least put effort into it