Since when someone showing up out of nowhere saying it's bad without any explanation why it is and without any tips to make it better is criticism? This is more like an opinion than an actual criticism
1. the intros are a huge interruption, i already know who's videos i'm watching. at least put like your name at the corner of the video or change it to an outro if you still want something like that.
2. you try way too hard to make it look "super duper professional lolz lel" and nobody really cares.
3. go back to what you did at least a year ago. that's why your year old + videos are more popular.
and um.... that's about it. have a nice day