ramps do not do the drones justice. I would use vertical plates and small ramps to make better curves.
Overall I would also make it bigger as well, as at this scale it's somewhat restricted. I'm not talking 2x the size, but maybe 20% bigger overall, because when Jack stands next to one, it's almost 2x taller than he is.
Also, bigger red eye aka use a brick or a print
overall not bad, 7/10