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Author Topic: How could I improve this warehouse? -Update-  (Read 2447 times)

I built this warehouse and I want to know what ways I could improve it











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« Last Edit: October 17, 2013, 03:38:14 AM by Legoboss »

the walls look like they can use bigger bricks unless those were intentional.


The interior is ok but the exterior is the one I'm focus on right now.
The roof is a little bit off and the windows should be fix to a more smaller one.

This is just the basics.

The interior is ok but the exterior is the one I'm focus on right now.
The roof is a little bit off and the windows should be fix to a more smaller one.

This is just the basics.
Er, it would be nice for you to explain this.

Warehouses often have glass windows on the ceiling, it'd be a nice touch to make it look less plain. Also, you might want to build the fences by yourself, not just using the default model, as it looks a little silly. However, I really like this build! Good work!


I see you used the 100% Stud brick texture when showing us this build. Id suggest switching to Squideeys or Manty's, they can hide the brick lines on buildings like these, just a little bit better then the Stud brick texture does.

I see you used the 125% Stud brick texture when showing us this build. Id suggest switching to Squideeys or Manty's, they can hide the brick lines on buildings like these, just a little bit better then the Stud brick texture does.
ftfy

OT:This warehouse reminds me of a DayZ video I watched a couple of days ago. I think you should hand-make the fences up on top as said before up above.

The exterior is very flat. Maybe try adding some stuff that adds relief to the wall.
Interior looks cozy.

I think the roof is well.. weird?

I think the roof could use more variation of ramps to make it look more round... or more round by some other means.

Maybe make the outside walls not so flat

Add edges to the outside that protrude from the wall

I think the roof is well.. weird?

I think the roof could use more variation of ramps to make it look more round... or more round by some other means.
It would be nice to have a picture or some kind of explanation