Author Topic: Avenger Class Cruiser - mini star cruiser :3  (Read 1424 times)







its a new ship to the fleet and ready for adventure :)

« Last Edit: October 23, 2013, 08:59:18 AM by The Black Card »

Do you want constructive criticism?



I can see you used a lot of little bricks: use the largest bricks you can
Your cannon barrels are disconnected from the base: use something flat to connect them
The emitters for the propulsion is a poor choice unless it's fairy dust
Very boxy, the bottom and rear top could use some sloping
You have good length slope. You have bad width sloping
The outer engines shouldn't just be chillin ' out half off the ship, that doesn't make sense structurally
The front is a very sudden stop. Lengthen it a little.

This one is a personal pet peeve, but by most standards it's good:
It's not a good scale. If a person is a 1x1x.6 space, your ship is 6 people wide and about 12 long
That's like a fighter jet.
But like I said that ones a personal peeve, overall it's nice

I can see you used a lot of little bricks: use the largest bricks you can
Your cannon barrels are disconnected from the base: use something flat to connect them
The emitters for the propulsion is a poor choice unless it's fairy dust
Very boxy, the bottom and rear top could use some sloping
You have good length slope. You have bad width sloping
The outer engines shouldn't just be chillin ' out half off the ship, that doesn't make sense structurally
The front is a very sudden stop. Lengthen it a little.

This one is a personal pet peeve, but by most standards it's good:
It's not a good scale. If a person is a 1x1x.6 space, your ship is 6 people wide and about 12 long
That's like a fighter jet.
But like I said that ones a personal peeve, overall it's nice

I had to add the side cannons so it didn't look like a snake :P


Looks far too much to me like the Galactica. I would change up some things to make it more unique, maybe add a third nacelle to the top.

I had to add the side cannons so it didn't look like a snake :P
There's another fix then, those don't look like cannons, maybe fuel containers, biosphere generators, life support, anything but a weapon...

100000/10 epic gimmi