Rap for class

[matthewbim11]

My history class was assigned to do a griot/poem/rap about something in our life so I decided to be 3origonal5u and do a BelAir parody.

In South Florida I was born and raised
Watchin' TV's how I spent most of my days
Chillin' out, maxin', relaxin' all cool
Playin' on my Gamecube when I get home from school
Then my mom came in, she was lookin' to clash
Wasn't happy bout' the grades in my class
I talk back one little time and her temper flared
She said; "Oh now you done it, you better be scared!"

I begged and pleaded with her day after day
To give me back my Gamecube but she told me; "No way!"
Then I said; "Aw forget it, just look at the time-
I'll never play my games, not even Metroid Prime"

Any suggestions before I read this in front of my class today?

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[dorkdotdan]

oh my god

[matthewbim11]

Are you amazed by my proe wrapper skeelz?

[dorkdotdan]

Are you amazed by my proe wrapper skeelz?

that works

[Clone v.117]

The grades in class line doesn't fit in.
Gotta rhyme it all yo.

[matthewbim11]

I can't find anything that fits. Suggestions?
Edit: Found something that fits, check OP.

[Machaty]

Haha I had to do something similar for my English class last year. I belive the first line was:
"White like snow not chocolate but vanilla
Go home to you momma and when you get there you should tell her "
Or something along the lines of that.

[RedGajin]

"who is this nerd" - entire class

[DrenDran]

"who is this nerd" - entire class

If he does it with confidence that's more than you could probably say about most of his classmates.

[Clone v.117]

If he does it with confidence that's more than you could probably say about most of his classmates.

Regardless, what Red said is still true, sad but true.

[Torin0101]

please record it so we can cringe in horror with the other raps

[Unvanquished]

Wow 10/10 best rap song 2013 would listen to again.

[[Maxx]]

is it bad that i cringed really hard

[GhostOfBetaTapes]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FArZxLj6DLk

The rap king's words come falling like a ton of bricks
makes you kids wish you had such pleasantries as stones and sticks
cause from my mouth flows rhyme like the congo
unstoppable, makes me want to crash a poetry slam just for kicks

[SlayerZ99]

is it bad that i cringed really hard

i cringed at the thought of you cringing

At least his is sorta creative