Author Topic: [150x100] Fa♦Te (Bylyn Village)  (Read 14490 times)

>Russell: Run to the blacksmith, but as you do so, check your pockets to make sure you have some money on you.

Before you go, grab the diamond/plus thing in between the title that is just out of frame!

Before you go, grab the diamond/plus thing in between the title that is just out of frame!


It's too high to rea-- Wait, what diamond thing?



You make a mad dash for the village, Bylyn. Hopefully you won't get yelled at too much.

INVENTORY:
« Last Edit: November 29, 2013, 07:37:41 PM by Kqgqn »

Just curious, what do female characters look like?





i'm making/posting the rest
oh god

What is with the title
its like fate but edgy

oh god

What is with the title
its like fate but edgy


"Fa" and "Te" are probably significant to the plot.

« Last Edit: November 29, 2013, 06:46:00 PM by Kqgqn »



am i suppos'ta remove the black line/FRONTBACK text bcos i can

Name: Raul
Personality: Friendly, social, outgoing, likes to hang around peop-er, bylyns a lot. Suit made of bronze because I'm keeping it steampunk. I should have changed the color of the black parts of the suit. That way, it wouldn't be ugly.
« Last Edit: November 29, 2013, 06:53:38 PM by CharlesSpeaking »

dear lord what did you do to its face



Not my final character, but how can I improve the dress? Is it steampunk enough without being the generic bronze outfit? also the proportions are weird but i can't tell where or am i not artistic enough and is the asymmetry bad eugh also background will be removed one sec

also do i have to slap gears on her
« Last Edit: November 29, 2013, 07:25:01 PM by childofdarkness016 »

these aliens look like they are always sagging
idk why



am i suppos'ta remove the black line/FRONTBACK text bcos i can

Name: Raul
Personality: Friendly, social, outgoing, likes to hang around peop-er, bylyns a lot. Suit made of bronze because I'm keeping it steampunk. I should have changed the color of the black parts of the suit. That way, it wouldn't be ugly.


Edited in order to attempt to fix. I hope you aren't too pissed off about it. Will still use the character



Not my final character, but how can I improve the dress? Is it steampunk enough without being the generic bronze outfit? also the proportions are weird but i can't tell where or am i not artistic enough and is the asymmetry bad eugh also background will be removed one sec

also do i have to slap gears on her

Looks good so far, though I recommend you extend the back of the dress (sort of like a trail, but not too much)

Update: scroll up.
« Last Edit: November 29, 2013, 07:30:46 PM by Kqgqn »

Edited in order to attempt to fix. I hope you aren't too pissed off about it. Will still use the character
that outfit is gorgeous