Author Topic: Charlie's Sports Bar  (Read 5084 times)

haha what a sperg

nice job titanium

It's pleasant
and that's all it is.

6/10, here's why:

•It's a rectangle, there is no interesting shape to the build at all
•You used ramps on the exterior of the build poorly, it just juts out like there is too much weight on the top
•Lights? No lights? So it's a day-only sports bar, and the second it's dark they shut down because there is not a single light in the entire build?
•It's one room. I understand sports bar, but adding more rooms or sections keeps it interesting. Add a 16x8 bathroom, add a 16x16 staff room, add a 32x16 storage area, cut out a 32x32 area for gambling, etc, SPICE IT UP
•No variety at all. The drinks come in one shape, and any of roughly 6 colors. So it's like rainbow beer. Make some martini glasses, shots, maybe some food while your at it with some STEAM coming off!
•Your tables are lame. 2 round bricks and a 4x16F plate brick. If you go out often, which I assume you do, you've seen tables before, and they don't look like that...

I only focused on the negatives, overall it is a lovely build, but if you plan to continue posting builds and such, keep the little details in mind! I look forward to seeing more posts of yours.

Also, this isn't so much the build, but you:
•That lighting is not helping you. It's hard to see the bar. Use your environmental settings to brighten it up, or ADD LIGHTS
• No activity! Add some people or bots! More smiles, more laughter, emotion! Hell, hiding a creep bear in the corner makes these kinds of things so much more fun for people! Get your buddies together, have them pose around, play with avatars, press F5 to toggle names, and take pictures! You wanna show off your work? Show off your work the way people might use your work: a social area, a game, etc

It's pleasant
and that's all it is.

6/10, here's why:

•It's a rectangle, there is no interesting shape to the build at all
•You used ramps on the exterior of the build poorly, it just juts out like there is too much weight on the top
•Lights? No lights? So it's a day-only sports bar, and the second it's dark they shut down because there is not a single light in the entire build?
•It's one room. I understand sports bar, but adding more rooms or sections keeps it interesting. Add a 16x8 bathroom, add a 16x16 staff room, add a 32x16 storage area, cut out a 32x32 area for gambling, etc, SPICE IT UP
•No variety at all. The drinks come in one shape, and any of roughly 6 colors. So it's like rainbow beer. Make some martini glasses, shots, maybe some food while your at it with some STEAM coming off!
•Your tables are lame. 2 round bricks and a 4x16F plate brick. If you go out often, which I assume you do, you've seen tables before, and they don't look like that...

I only focused on the negatives, overall it is a lovely build, but if you plan to continue posting builds and such, keep the little details in mind! I look forward to seeing more posts of yours.

Also, this isn't so much the build, but you:
•That lighting is not helping you. It's hard to see the bar. Use your environmental settings to brighten it up, or ADD LIGHTS
• No activity! Add some people or bots! More smiles, more laughter, emotion! Hell, hiding a creep bear in the corner makes these kinds of things so much more fun for people! Get your buddies together, have them pose around, play with avatars, press F5 to toggle names, and take pictures! You wanna show off your work? Show off your work the way people might use your work: a social area, a game, etc
Thank you for all the advice...helped me a lot unlike Titanium. The highest my shaders can go is minimum so ya it is dark. I was going to add bots but this isn't a post to show a scene, its just to show the build.

I don't think Titanium deserved the ban honestly, the only reason it was caused is because filipe had to make his reply to it. He doesn't have to put every single loving thing he thinks is bad about it if he doesn't want to

i'd give it a 6/10
the exterior looks spammy
but the inside is good