We have several move videos filmed. PROGRESSSSSSSS!
Awesome. Just out of curiousity, how much of your script do you write down, and how much do you improvise? If you're already doing a script, good, but maybe spend a tad longer tweaking it. If you're improvising, I'd suggest writing a script. Of course, improvising that proves to be funny anyway is sometimes ok, just makes sure you also record the scripted version in case you change your mind later.
Also, definitely take into consideration what childofdarkness said on the first page regarding camera usage (although it is ok to use auto-focus sometimes, like if you don't have a camera man who knows how to properly manually focus, don't have a cameraman in shots that move (unless the depth of field is deep), and in action shots that move or stylized shots. Otherwise, use manual focus when you can, but make sure it is actually focused! It is a real pain to get home and find out the camera wasn't focused on half of the shots.
Overall, I enjoyed it, and it is pretty good for a first video. Keep it up. :)