Gunna be honest here, it was a good video, but if we were to try to put it as best as we could, the voice acting needs to be even more fluent than it is and needs to be faster, and show a bit more emotion. I only watched the first part of it though, but if you were trying for something really great, you're gunna need a more believable voice actor team. It seemed to just be stale emotion with the dialogue from what I saw.
Otherwise, nice idea, and execution.