Colors stuff - W.I.P: edits being done

[lolz??]

I don't really know what to say about this project, I was bored to stuff and this ploped out, part of this was inspired by mod man's creations i saw in his threads (

) none of it is really a model or drawing so I don't know where to put this, since it took course over a long time and isn't even remotely done I'm making this topic for constructive critisicm (mainly on what should be done to the out of place PURPLE image) and mainly for ideas on what to do for other colors. I'm out of words to say so here you go

once again if you have any good ideas for other colors or any ideas on what to change, specifically on how to make everything fit together more, den tell me.

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[Teneksi]

ooh. Obviously I would like this.

Green seems terribly underwhelming by comparison though

[mod-man]

im so happy i inspired someone a little :)

heres my two cents:
i really like blue and orange. in my personal opinion i think blue would look a tiny bit better if the cubes were a little spread out tho, and i feel like the colors could blend a little better for orange but if thats what you where shooting for thats cool too. i also feel like the lighting could a use a bit touching up, maybe like a blue light for blue, red light for red etc.

overall, i really like it all. i love low poly pieces :D

[lolz??]

Ill make reds materials more realistic
Also thx for the help ten & mod
Once i get off my ipod ill change it

[Alanoll]

using the 3d stuff is a nice touch, but you haven't pulled it off very well.
like with the purple one, the text doesn't fit in the thing correctly


the red just looks a bit weird, because it's got the whole minimalistic flat-shaded 3d thing going on, while having loads of polygons (i.e., not the minimal amount)

orange looks weird, how the changes in shading are just rectangular sections, and the font is all serifed and the text doesn't align to the edges of the surfaces correctly, as well as blending into the part it's on a bit (making it harder to read)

blue is just a bit weird, especially whatever it is you've done with the text. the colours don't really complement each other or make for a nice composition.

the visual styles of all of this stuff really just seem to be inelegant and sloppy, really. Green doesn't really forget much up: the texture is nice and the whole "planty" element to it works well.

it's nice to experiment with what you have to work with, but it can really help if you pretend like you're making it for something, like a logo or a game thing, or just art. although typography (for some people) is art, its mostly used to communicate things blatantly, as opposed to the more ordinary kind of art, which is more about subtlety.

hope i wasn't too much of a constricted sphincter and that you can take something from my gabber