Author Topic: Janjira  (Read 4534 times)

A small, growing town me, Abstath, Brickitect, and others are starting. Right now we got a small portion finished, and we are working on a hill/river to separate the nuclear - yes - nuclear power plant. Give constructive criticism, and don't rate. Credit is show on the pictures.

Infinti Bank

mine

Swai Corp

mine

Car showroom

Game Master Joe

Skyscraper Office

Brickitect


Nuclear Power plant (Janjira Power)

Smokestacks

mine

Reactor Building

mine (abstath made the reactor)

Cooling Towers

Abstath

Control Building/Center

mine


So that's what we have so far, i'll keep updating the op in the future aswell. Don't rate x/10, because we are not finished.

« Last Edit: May 23, 2014, 10:59:16 AM by Score² »

All the buildings you make are on a 16x16 grid.
You should really try to make buildings which are more realistic and build more detailed floor plans of the basic shape of the buildings.
Its not hard to find pictures of real life power plans on the internet, Your buildings will improve greatly.


Other than this being horribly spammy, its also tiny as forget. Try to take into account the size of these, They're ATLEAST a 64x64 diameter. Remember that scene where Wolverine fights ontop of one of them in Xmen: Origins? Yeah that's the standard size of one.


This is what I mean about locking a build to a grid. this is an ugly boxy build and you should really try and spice it up a bit. Obviously its meant to look a little boxy but still, you could add so much to it which will make it look nicer.
Hazard posters for example could go on a blank side?

I'm not going to comment about the car showroom as it doesnt even look like anything right now, but if I could give you one tip to work on, its use real life pictures.

Other than this being horribly spammy, its also tiny as forget. Try to take into account the size of these, They're ATLEAST a 64x64 diameter. Remember that scene where Wolverine fights ontop of one of them in Xmen: Origins? Yeah that's the standard size of one.
Yeah, Abstath agrees that it is spammy and small, but we're not sure yet how to fix it

This is what I mean about locking a build to a grid. this is an ugly boxy build and you should really try and spice it up a bit. Obviously its meant to look a little boxy but still, you could add so much to it which will make it look nicer.
Hazard posters for example could go on a blank side?
I actually just noticed this is a cut up version of the actual one. The actual one is on the other side. Also, this plant was based of a real one.


i don't mean to beat the power plant thing into the ground, but as it stands that's not a power plant at all, much less a nuke plant. demo that control room and the current reactor, and build a reactor and some turbines similar to this. don't forget to link em all up with piping and stuff. also get rid of the smokestacks, nuke plants don't emit smoke. if ya'll do a bit o' research and scale it up a bit, that nuclear plant could be quite a fantastic build.
as for the other buildings, what's finished so far looks pretty good.


The power plant looks ok


Once finished, you should make a second version covered in over growth.


Once finished, you should make a second version covered in over growth.

hehe

I see what you did ther


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ggg3C87UVCY

What Furdle did to your power plant

not completely mine, me and abstath made it. abstath made the cooling towers :|

hehe
I see what you did ther
what did he do there
bc I'm not seeing any joke

what did he do there
bc I'm not seeing any joke

it is from a movie

i don't mean to beat the power plant thing into the ground, but as it stands that's not a power plant at all, much less a nuke plant. demo that control room and the current reactor, and build a reactor and some turbines similar to this. don't forget to link em all up with piping and stuff. also get rid of the smokestacks, nuke plants don't emit smoke. if ya'll do a bit o' research and scale it up a bit, that nuclear plant could be quite a fantastic build.
as for the other buildings, what's finished so far looks pretty good.

Nuke plant's reactors emit more of a 'steam' or white vapor in the air..
From what I see..