My Summer house V2

[danielmoya]

Well, Ive decide to remake the house I made before, now I used slanted bricks for the panels, added more windows, an interior, garden, and a greenhouse (Also a jacuzzi)

0/10 Please. Tell me what you think of it


Here is it.



Houses front (the yellow sphere seen in the pic was the warp thingies that appear)

Houses side



Garden and Greenhouse



Interior (Do you like the bed c:?)

[Ad Bot]

[Decimation]

well, atleast its better than the last one

[danielmoya]

well, atleast its better than the last one

Okay, but do you like it?

[Score²]

the bed is waaaaaaayyyyy to thin. also, you need to put more work into your Jacuzzi...

I guess the greenhouse is ok.

I rate 6/10

[Spikey]

The roof sides are too spammy. Try using longer length bricks to the side of the roof, along with the back of the couch. 4/10

[danielmoya]

the bed is waaaaaaayyyyy to thin. also, you need to put more work into your Jacuzzi...

I guess the greenhouse is ok.

I rate 6/10

Ive never got a higher rating in my builds :o (I guess)

[Strayer]

That's a lot better, since you corrected the walls and the colors of the house, I say your house is 8/10

[The Brighter Dark]

this is loads better then the first one. Great job taking suggestions and applying them to your build. 5/10

[[Na Pulse]]

Never use Grass emitters. they are horrid, asides from that.. This is pretty good. 7/10

[[insert name here]]

Never use Grass emitters. they are horrid, asides from that.. This is pretty good. 7/10

That was what i was gonna say

[Rally]

You've got some pretty good concepts down. Separating interior walls and exterior walls is a good step in the right direction. However, I do see a lot of room for improvement.

I'm just gonna list them for you:

Trimming - Your walls run directly from the floor to the roof. You should separate the wall from the roof and the floor by adding a thin brick between them to act as a trim or crown molding. I took two pictures to show you what I mean:



It separates floor from wall, and wall from ceiling. It'll make your interiors look 500x better, I promise you. Also, for your roof, you should extend them beyond the edges of the walls, and then cover the undersides with ramps. This will make them look more smooth, and the house overall less boxy.

Brickwork - Plenty of your walls are made up of small bricks when they could've been made with larger ones. This is quite ugly:



By using bigger bricks you could get rid of those little breaks between each brick. It makes the build look more stable and gives it better flow. The less noticeable breaks, and the lower the brick count, the better your build will look. Less is more.

Detail
I understand it's pretty difficult to detail with the blockiness of the brick grid, but with some special brick packs you can work some magic. However, it is still possible to have good attention to detail with the default bricks. Things I noticed in particular where things like the bed and the chairs. The bed is too thin, and the chairs look really gimmicky. Keep in mind things like proportion and functionality when building furniture.

Overall, I'd give it a 5.5/10. You've got good mechanics going on here, but could definitely use some refining.

[danielmoya]

You've got some pretty good concepts down. Separating interior walls and exterior walls is a good step in the right direction. However, I do see a lot of room for improvement.

I'm just gonna list them for you:

Trimming - Your walls run directly from the floor to the roof. You should separate the wall from the roof and the floor by adding a thin brick between them to act as a trim or crown molding. I took two pictures to show you what I mean:



It separates floor from wall, and wall from ceiling. It'll make your interiors look 500x better, I promise you. Also, for your roof, you should extend them beyond the edges of the walls, and then cover the undersides with ramps. This will make them look more smooth, and the house overall less boxy.

Brickwork - Plenty of your walls are made up of small bricks when they could've been made with larger ones. This is quite ugly:



By using bigger bricks you could get rid of those little breaks between each brick. It makes the build look more stable and gives it better flow. The less noticeable breaks, and the lower the brick count, the better your build will look. Less is more.

Detail
I understand it's pretty difficult to detail with the blockiness of the brick grid, but with some special brick packs you can work some magic. However, it is still possible to have good attention to detail with the default bricks. Things I noticed in particular where things like the bed and the chairs. The bed is too thin, and the chairs look really gimmicky. Keep in mind things like proportion and functionality when building furniture.

Overall, I'd give it a 5.5/10. You've got good mechanics going on here, but could definitely use some refining.

Okay, thanks for the tips. Im going to look for those print bricks, you know, print bricks dont make breaks.

[Mr Man]

Would look a little better if it weren't all one room, houses of that size usually aren't. Other than that, it's pretty good

[danielmoya]

Would look a little better if it weren't all one room, houses of that size usually aren't. Other than that, it's pretty good

Thanks!

[Spikey]

I recommend using the "Vertical Print Plate" pack, it adds much more detail, and can be used for wall plating, eliminating any "breaks".