Author Topic: VH's MotE RE-application (FINAL)  (Read 5116 times)

Here's the final product, everything that I want to do to it is done, if I don't get in with this, oh well, I wont be re applying using this build again.















« Last Edit: December 09, 2007, 03:45:34 AM by VerticalHorizon »

I like the scenery but the big Tree is a tad square and boring and although the building is better than most it's also rather boring.

6/10 sorry.

That is a epic build, I love it you should this in the epic builds v9.

I think the trees do tend to follow a perfect pattern, I'm not quite sure about that. I also agree with Pickle about the big tree. Nonetheless it was a great attempt, but not quite there. There's always next time though.


I have to agree with Spation; it's nice, but there are some mistakes that shouldn't be committed next time.

The trees:
-It's a natural forest. Trees grow in an irregular pattern.
-The big tree looks ugly. I'd rather you looked up the "Post a tree" thread.

The shack looked nice, just like the waterfall, however, I still felt that something was missing.

there should be bigger more irregular trees

Part of this was built on the EotA server. I was told that VH was building this as an application for EotA. But apparently not.

Waterfall needs more rocky.

Trees need more irregularity.

Shack needs more cozy.

Land needs more landscaping.

Those are my suggestions, feel free to ignore them.

I vote nay.
Aww dang man better luck next time.


PS:i like teh build.

It's nice but requires moar
No for now

Like:
No open space, makes it look... full.
Use of colour
The whole idea in general

Don't like:
Macroed trees look too repetitive
The big tree looks odd

Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the suggestions, all have been taken into effect in this version, I hope you like it enough to accept me. :D

Much better, Don't have much else to say.

I say yes. I hope you get in.