Author Topic: Derailed Redux - [ACT 1, CH. 1] As Above, So Below  (Read 2550 times)

Sorry for the double post, but this entire adventure is not about the train derailing. Go along with the story, and stop trying to make it go where it will eventually instead.

(btw it's not redq there's no o line)

A while ago, I started a forum adventure called Subway Stories centered around being stuck in a subway tunnel after a train derails.

I enjoyed writing it, but never finished it. So, as the great Ray Charles once sang, here we go again. This time, I've added ambient noise and music to the adventure while you read. If you'd like, click the station signs or links within the text.



It's already 8 AM and nobody's down on the platform. Guess they're still watching Good Morning America.

You hold your morning coffee in your hand, fiddling about with your phone in the other. Despite the already sweltering heat of summer apparent above ground, the tunnels provide a cool, albeit foul smelling, respite. As you shift your bag on your shoulder, another cool breeze floats through the tunnel and onto the platform.

You glance behind you at the map on the wall. 168th Street, formerly known as Washington Heights - 168th. A good portion of the map is in Spanish, a nod to the mostly Spanish and Hispanic population in the Heights. You give a friendly nod to a young woman who descends the stairs onto the platform. She returns the nod with a slight smile.

It's 2014, and you ponder why MTA hasn't bothered putting up LED schedule screens as you check your watch for the fifteenth time. Guess the conductor coming down from 181st is taking his sweet ass time. You have a bit of time to kill, so you put in your earbuds and turn on a little bit of Bombay Bicycle Club. The din of the station is suddenly exchanged with the guitar and bass laced capo of Always Like This as you take a sip of your coffee.

...

Several minutes pass and your music changes several times. Eventually growing tired of listening to music, you pull your earbuds back out and stuff them into your pocket. Another minute passes before the intercom blares to life.

"1 train approaching, service to South Ferry."

Finally. You shuffle your bag once more as the train enters the station, the screeching of the brakes deafening as it echoes off the vaulted ceiling. You're already at the doors as they hiss open, and in the car before anybody has even exited (not that they would).

The car is relatively empty, save for you, the girl from the platform, and an older man sitting at the back reading the Wall Street Journal. You take a seat and set your bag down next to you as you sip your coffee once more.

It's gonna be a long ride downtown. What now?

a. Check your bag.
b. Listen to more music.
c. Sleep.
« Last Edit: September 04, 2014, 10:02:58 PM by Comatose »

Don't sleep. How do you know the train won't derail in your sleep?
Listening to music is a massive distraction too.
Checking your bag is the only reasonable option because it wastes the least amount of time

Also, heights? As in Jackson Heights or Washington Heights?
« Last Edit: July 21, 2014, 06:45:42 AM by Zanaran2 »

Don't sleep. How do you know the train won't derail in your sleep?
Listening to music is a massive distraction too.
Checking your bag is the only reasonable option because it wastes the least amount of time

Also, heights? As in Jackson Heights or Washington Heights?

You glance behind you at the map on the wall. 168th Street, formerly known as Washington Heights - 168th.

Stop being a paranoid forget and just relax and listen to some music whilst checking your bag. Sleeping is for the weak so don't do that.

Stop being a paranoid forget and just relax and listen to some music whilst checking your bag. Sleeping is for the weak so don't do that.

The rocking of the subway car nearly lulls you to sleep, but you decide to pull your earbuds back out. Not bothering to check what's next, you turn on your music and an aptly named song plays.

You look over at your bag and pull it onto your lap before unzipping the back pocket. Inside is your broken tablet, which happens to be why you're going downtown in the first place. You zip the back pocket up, and unzip the next one. Inside this pocket are some crumpled papers and other guff such as chewing gum. You zip the bag back up and set it next to you before patting your pocket to check for your wallet.

It seems to be there, but you pull it out and open it to check everything is there. Your ID, belonging to a Mr. Adam Fassett, is still where you left it, as is everything else.



Not wanting to waste your phone's battery, you turn off your music and stuff your earbuds in your bag as the train rattles along. Once more, you are overcome by the sounds of the tunnels. A light shines from the end of the tunnel, and you quickly pass by the unusually empty platform of 145th.

A gruff voice sounds from the end of the subway car as the older man speaks. "Unusually empty for rush hour on a Tuesday."

You nod to yourself and sit back in your chair, allowing a sigh to release. What now?

Slip out your Glock 17 that you've had inside your right pocket this entire time and stand up and attempt to take everyone in the train car with your currently hostage. Make sure the safety's off, and if you're that much of a clumsy ass, that there's a magazine in that forgeter cause the moment you slip that stuff out someone's gonna consider playing hero, so you've gotta be ready to drop him right there and then. If and when you do drop a forgeter, unzip your pants and piss on the nearest woman. This is normal, you're marking your territory. Wait until you come to the next station, and when you do loving force the driver to stop this stuff and get out with your new slave and get home to sell her over the internet for a good dozen grand.

Slip out your Glock 17 that you've had inside your right pocket this entire time and stand up and attempt to take everyone in the train car with your currently hostage. Make sure the safety's off, and if you're that much of a clumsy ass, that there's a magazine in that forgeter cause the moment you slip that stuff out someone's gonna consider playing hero, so you've gotta be ready to drop him right there and then. If and when you do drop a forgeter, unzip your pants and piss on the nearest woman. This is normal, you're marking your territory. Wait until you come to the next station, and when you do loving force the driver to stop this stuff and get out with your new slave and get home to sell her over the internet for a good dozen grand.

what the forget

what the forget
i want to make a new character that's a robot dragon

i want to make a new character that's a robot dragon

sigh

-blarf-
Inspect the train for possible escape routes, and other usable objects in case of a derail.
Drink all the remaining coffee. Zip your bag, put the more valuable items in the middle of it, and surround them with clothes and other soft stuff.
The old guy is probably gona attempt to murder you then rape the lady so get ready for self defense ugh
Subtly study the other peeps personalities.

Inspect the train for possible escape routes, and other usable objects in case of a derail.
Drink all the remaining coffee. Zip your bag, put the more valuable items in the middle of it, and surround them with clothes and other soft stuff.
The old guy is probably gona attempt to murder you then rape the lady so get ready for self defense ugh
Subtly study the other peeps personalities.

You begin to examine the train, but then chuckle to yourself. Just your paranoia.

You chug the rest of your now lukewarm coffee, and sling your bag over your shoulder as the train arrives at 137th - City College. The older gentleman folds up his newspaper and picks up a briefcase off the seat next to him, giving you a small wave goodbye as he steps off the train. Must be a professor.

The young woman glances over at you and smiles once more before looking back down at her phone as the train doors close. The train departs the station as quickly as it arrived, and you decide to stand up, grabbing a metal bar above you. You take a quick glance at her and her clothing, surmising that she must be an intern at city hall or something.

Your stop's coming up soon. What do you do in the meantime?

Sorry for the double post, but this entire adventure is not about the train derailing. Go along with the story, and stop trying to make it go where it will eventually instead.

sit down and continue listening to your sweet jams

Take the train hostage, obviously. Getting your tablet fixed will cost dosh, and you need women to get that dosh so grab some and sell 'em.

Take the train hostage, obviously. Getting your tablet fixed will cost dosh, and you need women to get that dosh so grab some and sell 'em.

Get the forget out.



sit down and continue listening to your sweet jams

I'll write the response to this in the morning.