ok,, if you really want me to criticize, i'll do it a lot.
Her right leg makes it lok like she is right about to topple over, I suggest making her seem more stable.
Part that forgot to get colored in in the left corner of the Stormtrooper, whatever it is on the ground has outlines but the people below don't, kinda unmatching if they are both supposed to be background things
The left arm seems to be really wonky, like it has a bunch of lumps.
Also, why is one foot bigger then the other?
anyways thats just me being super mega critical these drawings are all pretty cool are you satisfied now i wasn't forced to do this not at all ok yeag