THE BALLAD OF EDGARDO - THE COMIC - PAGE 1 IS DONE

[Taboo]

What the forget this??

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Draft of Page 1:


This is basically just to present how I would like to do the comic in terms of format and style. The final page, due in a few hours, will be redrawn to much greater quality. Anyone who might be familiar with my art knows that I am capable of really cranking the quality. But first I'd like to get peoples thoughts on what we have here.
For starters, I kinda forgeted the layout by mispositioning the logo. Oops. Our ~mystery narrator~ there isn't framed as well as I'd like, but that'll be dealt with in the final version.

[Ad Bot]

[RedJohn]

is this happening right now

[Taboo]

barely but yes

[Georges]

This is good.

Yes. Yes indeed it is.

[Mr.Noßody]

You have to draw faces eventually...

[Taboo]

You have to draw faces eventually...

Can I give Squid ASCII_terror?

[synthesispandabot]

i need this
pls

[TrainandSpacelover]

Can I give Squid ASCII_terror?

please do

[Taboo]

Finished a panel. Here's a fairly more accurate representation of the level of quality you can expect to see from this comic.

This is, of course, only the approximate resolution it have on the page.
For the daring, here is the full resolution panel.

[Taboo]

Page 1

It's a good thing the EA conference was thoroughly uninteresting so I didn't get too distracted to finish this.

[eboyblue10]

This is actually happening

[Satan From Wreck-It-Ralph]

taboo i love you please lets have love

[PurpleSir]

spoiler alert the guy he's talking to is squid

[Biohazard]

>oldcigarette's tale
>story posted in 2013

[WaterOre]

wow, an easily digestible version of the wall of greentext landmineman400² posted
color me impressed