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you should edit this a bit. needs some more drama honestly.How about the girlfriend gets captured, adding another reason why they form a squad. They have to raid an entire enemy base to save her.
I forgot to say, at the beginning it would have a flashback. Then he's back st the airport flying to the bedroom. I think a character could be sir Wrapperup, lord of the new bedroom.
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