Need to make an essay for my global issues class. Help me bash friends.

[Electrk.]

Do you know any sites that are good for finding information? Like when it started becoming poisonous and the different stuff they've done?

http://google.com

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[beachbum111111]

Doing it on Feminism. Will post here when I'm done.

[devildogelite]

I'm really laughing at gamergate being  a serious issue. How does anyone give a forget about something so worthless. Gaming "journalism" has always been stuff, did everyone forget about Game Spot firing a reviewer for not giving the review they wanted him to?

[beachbum111111]

Alright i finished the essay a long ass time ago but for anyone who's interested on how it turned out.
https://www.mediafire.com/?va333lryd8zxx1v

[childofdarkness016]

Was it supposed to be an informal essay?

[Electrk.]

what was your grade/their reactions

[SeventhSandwich]

What's wrong with social justice? Inherently, it's a good thing, even though the zeal of its supporters can get annoying.

[beachbum111111]

What's wrong with social justice? Inherently, it's a good thing, even though the zeal of its supporters can get annoying.

It's not social justice. We are talking about the Social Justice Warriors.

what was your grade/their reactions

I haven't gotten a mark back yet. I probably got a stuff mark since my teacher is an extreme liberal.

[SeventhSandwich]

It's not social justice. We are talking about the Social Justice Warriors.

"Why Social Justice is Cancer"

[childofdarkness016]

I probably got a stuff mark since my teacher is an extreme liberal.

Or perhaps your essay was poorly written? Opinions aside, I didn't like it much. I might even write a formal review of it if I have the time.

Again, if this level of writing is what's accepted in your school then I guess it's fine?? I might be putting you under absurdly high standards.

[Electrk.]

I haven't gotten a mark back yet. I probably got a stuff mark since my teacher is an extreme liberal.

or because it's poorly-written

it's very informal, there's no header, in fact it doesn't even follow any traditional formatting style
it's like you didn't even try

[childofdarkness016]

or because it's poorly-written

it's very informal, there's no header, in fact it doesn't even follow any traditional formatting style
it's like you didn't even try

i'd guess he'd remove whatever header his teacher expects to hide personal information

and maybe it's an informal essay?

[SeventhSandwich]

i'd guess he'd remove whatever header his teacher expects to hide personal information

and maybe it's an informal essay?

It doesn't sound like the assignment is supposed to be informal or personal. I read through the essay and it suffers from some extreme weaknesses, including but not limited to: Sentence grammatical errors, awkwardness in flow, immature voice, improper citation(this one would get you thrown out of college), unaddressed arguments, strange formatting (you switch from 1.5 spacing to double spacing for no apparent reason), and awkward or non-existent structure. If you submitted this paper using some kind of online system, you should retract it and make some heavy edits before the final due date. Regardless of the credibility of your arguments, I can't see any half-decent English teacher giving this paper any grade higher than a 50%.

[beachbum111111]

there's no header, in fact it doesn't even follow any traditional formatting style
it's like you didn't even try

Because I'm going to include the header that has my name, the teachers name, and school. I removed it before I posted it online. The teacher was also very vague with how we were suppose to write it.

It doesn't sound like the assignment is supposed to be informal or personal. I read through the essay and it suffers from some extreme weaknesses, including but not limited to: Sentence grammatical errors, awkwardness in flow, immature voice, improper citation(this one would get you thrown out of college), unaddressed arguments, strange formatting (you switch from 1.5 spacing to double spacing for no apparent reason), and awkward or non-existent structure. If you submitted this paper using some kind of online system, you should retract it and make some heavy edits before the final due date. Regardless of the credibility of your arguments, I can't see any half-decent English teacher giving this paper any grade higher than a 50%.

I literally had a day to write it. It's also worth only 5% of my mark and I already have an 88% in that class.

[Mr.Noßody]

Do the essay on social justice being dumb. Covers two of the other topics. More to write about.