[UPDATE!!] 2x2f The Terminal Newspaper from HL2

[MunkeyCheez]

My first print so it's nothing special really.

The Terminal Newspaper, straight 'outta Half-Life 2 (sort of).
V.2!! https://www.dropbox.com/s/oqsjdjjuqow9zhi/Print_2x2f_hl2.zip?dl=0

Constructive criticism would be appreciated.

.. prepare for unforeseen future releases...

[Ad Bot]

[Barnabas]

Yes, I made it in the news!

On a more serious note, you should make the decal feel more paper-like, add some crumples and stains, give it some sort of texture.

[MunkeyCheez]

Yes, I made it in the news!

On a more serious note, you should make the decal feel more paper-like, add some crumples and stains, give it some sort of texture.

congrats lol.

i'll keep that in mind, thanks

[Jay the Cartoonist]

In addition to that, the way the text is layed out doesn't feel news-papery at all.  Just looks like a bunch of randomly placed text boxes.  Newspapers are very tight and almost no space isn't filled with something.

[MunkeyCheez]

In addition to that, the way the text is layed out doesn't feel news-papery at all.  Just looks like a bunch of randomly placed text boxes.  Newspapers are very tight and almost no space isn't filled with something.

going to re-work it later on when i get more time on my hands.
Done. It's been reworked and more detail has been put into it.

but... speaking of hands...