I've had this idea for several years now of a group of people who obtain pseudo-telekinetic powers from an unidentified object striking them from space, and I've been trying to get it on paper since. However, school and sloth started kicking in and I never really got far past the first few chapters. I'll try to push through and finish this project of mine, and hopefully turn it into something better, like a book or even a a game.
This thread's probably gonna die/end up with me, like, lovetuple posting because a lot of folks prefer to see pictures than long walls of text (hence why all creative writing threads die in a matter of days)
Link to the google docs site.Chapter List:
Chapter 1 - Spark in the Sky
Chapter 2 - working on after revising Ch. 1
Criticism and suggestions are greatly appreciated, just make it constructing instead of bashing my story into the ground, kay? Comments will be cleared every few weeks because I don't want the entire thing to be all cluttered. Also, do not guarantee that what you see now is going to be the final version, as I will be constantly working on and improving this thing.