Author Topic: USSR app wip  (Read 3752 times)

I know this might sound really crazy but i want to try to get into a good clan as a goal. please i want no critisizm because i nearly just started the build and it will take a while but if anyone wants to add comments or tips please feel free. and no rating on this one because its not close to being done and i dont want it rated until its done. and please once again i want to remind you no critisizm i just want to try cause it doesnt hurt to try so hope you like.










the red yellow and blue dot-things seem out of place

Does that mean your going to quit {LV}?

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Does that mean your going to quit {LV}?


No just simply aiming higher..

I think it's too macroed and stuff, and Afkpuz says he won't vote until he can actually tell what's going on, the screenshots are too bad.

So it's a no unless you improve it some and give better shots.

I am improving i have been working on it since ive been home what you see now is nothing compare to what it will be in about a week and sorry bout screen shots i know they bad quality.

woah lots of brick looks to detailed. could put some stuff in the middle

Honestly, you'll need more work to get in USSR. It's good so far, but add more.

I have no clue what to say to this upon seeing it. not saying it's unworthy, but I really don't know if It is quite USSR material. and I'm not quite sure what it is.

holy cow! i literally said that when i read it! "holy cow!" hahah

this is pretty good man.

i dunno what could go in the courtyard area, uh, maybe a fountain, and a stage, and some pews or something...

garden perhaps.

anyway, USSR or not, this is looking really cool! has that ancient kinda feel to it, i dunno if thats what youre going for. keep up the good work! :D

I think it's too macroed and stuff,

same here all the walls look the same. still nice from a distance though.

it needs more stuff in it imo

i don't like the screenshots. needs more full screen resolution and anti aliasing. makes me dizzy


but looks like something cool, i hate to really give an opinion on unfinished stuff.
and cant give advice since i don't know where your going with this.

looks nifty though, finish it up. ill be looking forward to it


Try using a few more colors rather than just the sandstone for the general structure of the build.  These will bring out the detail more than any 1680x1050 AA'd shots will.  As Anti said, I'm joining the "wtf is going on here visually guyz lol" crowd.

This also does look very macro'd.  Keep in mind that when people say that, it's not a matter of whether or not you actually used the marcros (well I suppose it is, since if you didn't you've got waaay too much time on your hands) as it's a matter of homogeneity of detail in the build.  Personally I grade mostly on asthetics and proportion, and from what I can see I'm going to say no as it stands.  You have a lot of clever brickwork, from what I can tell, but ultimately rather than cleverly weaving these elements together into a cohesive whole, you've chosen to stack a lot of things on top of each other.  For example, the parts of the gate contain the exact same arch, and the middle building looks to be exactly twice as tall as the two that flank it.  While this is a perfectly valid technique that can result in some really cool builds architecturally, I feel like you didn't really utilize it in a creative (or conscious) way.  That said, I love the little bits of color (jewels?) you've got in there, and I want to see you do more with those.  I feel they could tie the build together.

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lol this are serious thread