Author Topic: WIP Modern House v2  (Read 1555 times)

I am rebuilding the modern house I built on Ahemidksomething's city RP, but on Kreon's Community RP.
Exterior

Family gathering area

Dining/Kitchen (ignore the gun pls)

Bathroom

Room with lots of potential and a sun roof

Outdoor pool (yes, second floor)


This is WIP, so things may change.
Rate x/10 and leave constructive criticism, please.

Sorry for storming your house esse, it looks nice

if I have one suggestion, it's to add a black, flat roof that comes down as a stripe off the side of the house

Sorry for storming your house esse, it looks nice

if I have one suggestion, it's to add a black, flat roof that comes down as a stripe off the side of the house
What do you mean by the stripe?

2many windows. not detailed enough

2many windows. not detailed enough
most modern houses are like all windowed

Add random wood paneling on the side, no really I'm not joking, go look up pictures of modern houses on google for good reference, and so you understand what I mean, cause it sounds random.

the ceiling gave me aids, put ceiling print tiles on it
the pool is not a pool. it is a pool but it isn't.
no random wood paneling
tv is ugly
who stores a gun in an open spot
please make the glass on the shower door openable
tbh the couch is kinda big
those chairs look odd
pretty grey

6.5/10 overall though, just make it less bland and fix the ceiling

It is WIP, I was going to add print tiles

the ceiling gave me aids, put ceiling print tiles on it
the pool is not a pool. it is a pool but it isn't.
no random wood paneling
tv is ugly
who stores a gun in an open spot
please make the glass on the shower door openable
tbh the couch is kinda big
those chairs look odd
pretty grey

6.5/10 overall though, just make it less bland and fix the ceiling

Hehe

most modern houses are like all windowed
I googled "Modern House". Tell me when you find one that are "like all windowed"

Agreed. Too many windows.

Jesus christ, I get that modern houses usually have a lot of windows, but this house is made out of them. Go and remove some of the windows and make them into walls. Cover up the ceiling with print tiles and add some more elements to it like some brick or wooden parts. Other than that it's pretty decent.

less winders n ur fine

Fixed all listed issues.



(ignore the guns, those are for the RP)


Also, a sneak peek of another project:


It's a lot better but I still dislike all the windows