The ending was the best. Since it's your first attempt at a skit, I'll give some tips to youtubeing.
First, HD. It's everywhere these days so try going for videos filmed at 1280x720 for 720p, or 1920x1080 for 1080p.
Second, Frame rate. Seems to be a problem with anyone really, I'd recommend sticking to 30fps unless you understand the fundamentals of video recording. Even if you filmed at 30, your game maybe the one causing the low frame rate, since I was one of those players (curse you intel) you can lower your max draw distance to somewhere where the low frame rate turns to decent, playable frame rate.
Third, Player Names and chat. When it comes to filming a game like Blockland, there's these annoying chat messages, and unwanted names in your shot, now f5 does half your work,
Boomerangdog and Jookia's Camera Mod will give you a blank PlayGUI, in which you can then film without the chat.
Hope this helps.