Cypthon's Thread of Horror

[Cypthon]

Story 5
This story is from the view of a 14 year old boy named Jack.
Jack was going to sleep on a Friday, he decided to stay up until 1:00AM. He did so, and he was ready to finally sleep, until he heard the front door open. Stupidly, Jack heard a voice that SOUNDED like his parent, since they worked the night shift and get off around the time he went to bed. The voice he heard said, "I'm home." He ignored it since he was mad at his parents. He finally went to bed. About 2 hours later, he hears a sound. A sound of a photo being taken on a phone, and a flash. Jack thought it was just him tired and the sound was from a natural weird noise from the house. He woke up the next morning, looking for his phone, failing to find it. 2 days later, he finds his phone in the basement. He was creeped out, since he had never left it in the basement. He was looking at photos of him and his Girlfriend, until he came across a disturbing photo. A photo of him asleep. He immediately ran upstairs to his parents in fear showing them the photo he had found. For what ever reason, Jack asked if any of them had came home at 1:00AM. His parents replied, "We went to work at 3:00AM.."
Jack's heart almost stopped, knowing his parents had been home asleep the entire time, and hearing the front door opening and hearing his dad saying he came home. Jack told his parents everything. They called the police and told them everything. Sadly, they couldn't do anything about it. You would think it would end there, but no. The kid's parents kept getting close to Jack since the incident. But one night, Jack wakes up hearing his parents yelling at somebody. Jack walks down stairs, seeing his mom crying, dad calling the police, and blood tracks leading outside. Jack asks his parents what happened. Jack's parents say that they woke up to noticing somebody peering into their bedroom, then walking to your bedroom, but ran downstairs noticing them walking out of the master bedroom. The dad got a hold of the man, in combat, the man started bleeding, and got out of his grip loveual harassing the mother, then running out leaving blood tracks. The police followed the blood tracks, stopping near a man hole. The man to this day was never found.

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[Cypthon]

2spooky4me D:

rly scary

[Col. Derontchi]

Just a tip. Use more descriptive writing to build suspense. For example, in Story 4, instead of "Daniel began to get a bad feeling", you could say something like, "A tingling sensation went up his spine, his gut folding over itself deeper and deeper into a ball. Something was wrong." Not a great example, but hopefully you get what I'm trying to say.

[Cypthon]

Just a tip. Use more descriptive writing to build suspense. For example, in Story 4, instead of "Daniel began to get a bad feeling", you could say something like, "A tingling sensation went up his spine, his gut folding over itself deeper and deeper into a ball. Something was wrong." Not a great example, but hopefully you get what I'm trying to say.

Yeah, i understand. I should also use more of a bigger vocabulary. Ill try to improve in Volume 2. Thanks man.

[Cypthon]

Volume 2

Story 1:
Leila is a mother of a family with 3 kids, 2 dogs, one father. Leila and Dominic were going to hit on a few stores on Black Friday, mostly early Christmas shopping. They went to ToysRus and got a few toys for Christmas, the father meant his buddy Rick at the store, so he went with Rick somewhere, leaving the mother by her self. Leila puts everything in the trunk of her car and gets in the car. Leila started having a tingling feeling in her spine, like unnerved. She assumed it was because there was a Police Truck by her. She drove off and so did the Police truck. Leila planned on going to Target next. She got on a Highway which was crowded. Leila sighs as she waits in the crowded Highways on Black Friday.
Suddenly, the car shakes which disturbs and scares Leila. Leila looks in the car mirrors thinking the car behind her hit her car. She looks in the mirror and finds out she is at the end of the traffic. Leila gets confused about what happened. Leila's mind is filled with confusion and nerves about what just happened. Suddenly, more cars come behind her, as well as the Police truck from earlier. The police truck's siren begins going off like a blood curdling scream. All the cars move out of the way but Leila. Leila thinks she is in trouble with the law so she parks to the side, as well as the huge Police Truck. The officer leaves the truck and walks up to Leila. The officer asks Leila to lower the window.
Leila asks, "Do you need something officer?"
The officer replies, "Yeah, get out of the car." Leila is confused about what she did wrong.
Leila in confusion says, "What did i do wr -"
The officer cuts her off and yells, "GET OUT OF THE loving CAR".
Leila walks out of the car with her hands up. The officer pushes her to the car and pulls out a gun and starts shooting into the back seat. Leila screams loudly, "What the hell are you doing?!"
The office ignores her and opens the back door. Leila sees the officer carrying out a man with a bloody clown mask with a butcher knife. The officer cuffs the man and puts him in the truck.
The officer explains to Leila that he noticed a man with a knife in her car as she left, so he tried to get her Attention and capture the man. Leila is petrified because any moment she could have had her throat slit by a man she never knew was in her car. To this day, Leila has fear down her throat and spine about the man and how close she was to dying.

[Cypthon]

Story 2:

This story has two main characters, one male (Kert) and one female (Jenny).
This happened to both Kert and Jenny. They were together as Boyfriend and girlfriend since middle school, an they are now in college and they share a house together. One night, Kert got up to get a drink since he was thirsty. He was walking by Jenny's room, where he notices her door wide open.
Kert peaks inside, and his heart stops in fear. There was a man standing at the edge of Jenny's bed. Kert speed walks to his room and right away calls the police about the situation. Kert locks his door and talks to the operator on the line. Kert suddenly hears footsteps in the hallway and Jenny's door shutting. Kert realizes that the intruder had left Jenny's room.
Kert realizes that Jenny has a very quite ring tone, but good enough to wake her up. Kert calls Jenny and Jenny wakes up and picks up the phone.
Jenny notices Kert has a very horrified voice.
Jenny asks, "What's wrong?"
Kert then explains, "There was a man watching you sleep.. He is in the hall way. Lock your door."
Jenny freaks out and locks the door.
5 minutes pass, and Kert and Jenny haven't heard the intruder. Jenny and Kert wonder if they can run for it. Suddenly, Kert screams as the intruder begins banging on his door trying to break it down. Kert screams blood curdling, this was the scariest moment of his life. Chills go down his spine, as his life gets darker and darker. Suddenly, it stops. Out of nowhere, Kert hears banging on the phone line. Jenny screams into the phone and the intruder is trying to get into her room.
The intruder says, "Let me in little girl..."
Suddenly by a miracle, Police sirens are heard outside as they park into the drive way and quickly get inside the house. The intruder runs out of the house from the back door. The police search the yard and house, later to find the man hiding in a bush. The man was shot in the stomach and he died of cancer later on. Jenny and Kert are glad that the man is dead.

[Akio-]

christmas isnt supposed to be scary

[Cypthon]

3 coincidences that turned into horror stories

Story 1 (inspired by true story)
It was about a innocent boy in a ski mask. It was snowing, and he was walking home. He sees a lady walking, walking to the direction he needs to go. He follows the woman. The woman looks back at him worried sick. The woman speeds up. The weather get worse. The boy follows her in hurry. A block later, she is running to the direction he needs to go. 5 minutes later of running, the boy gets home, realizing he seemed like a criminal. The next day, he tells the.woman that he isn't a criminal and it was all a coincidence. The woman shockingly admits she wasn't running from him, she was running from the one behind the boy...
A day later, she was murdered..

Story 2
Austin went on a drive and saw a couple walking into a new York light house. He gets confused because the light house should be closed. He struggles is off thinking he was with wrong. He walks down town new York noticing the same couple from earlier entering a rich restaurant, which again he swears is closed. Austin drives to a rich neighborhood wherever his official is. He coincidentally sees the same couple from before, noticing them Dropping a piece of paper. Austin parks in his office's parking lot and goes to the paper.
Austin suddenly has shock in his face. He sees a list of specific places. Including the restaurant and light house. Austin calls the police and show them the list and telling them everything else.
It was night, at Austin's. Somebody began fiddling with the door knob. Austin gets his gun and prepares himself. He looks out the window seeing the couple. They notice Austin with a gun and they run.

[Satan From Wreck-It-Ralph]

pay more attention in english class, alright?

[Cypthon]

pay more attention in english class, alright?

K

[TheABELBOTO]

It went from being an OK story to cheesy and ridiculous thanks to one sentence lol

[Cypthon]

It went from being an OK story to cheesy and ridiculous thanks to one sentence lol

It would probably have been better if I was using my laptop, since I write my stories with it, and the fact I rushed the story.

[Red Spy]

because who goes to McDonalds at Night? Fat people.

lmao

[Cypthon]

Story 3: (inspired by a true story)
On thanksgiving day, there was a boy who had just finished eating Thanksgiving dinner. He was stuffed up and about to go to bed early. His mother exclaims to him to go and let the dog in. The boy does as she says and goes to the front door. He opens the door and creaks open the screen door to call out for the dog. As he calls for the dog, he notices a man trying to get into the boy's brother's friend's car. The boy closes the screen door and crouches. The boy looks at the man as he scouts the yard, until the man starts looking at him. The boy starts getting convinced that it is his brother's friend. The boy cracks open the screen door to talk to him. He suddenly realizes his biggest mistake... that wasn't what he thought. The boy locks the door and runs up stairs and tells his parents about what happened.
They didn't call the police because they believe it was brother's friend. The boy looks outside, later to find the man walking in the middle of the street walking up to other peoples houses...