Author Topic: i slapped together some dumb song lyrics in like 30 minutes  (Read 534 times)

hey i wrote some bullstuff that i thought looked kinda cool so i thought i would share
sorry about the gay edge stuff but i guess its just what came to mind

I feel like I'm a waste of your time
No, don't think it's your fault
'cause I'm pretty sure it's mine

So I'll just sit here, nod and smile and pretend that I'm fine but I'm already losing track of how much I want to die
'Cause the number keeps-a-rising all the forgetin' time

Yeah, I don't know what to do and
I don't know what to think
But I'm pretty sure I won't find it out before I sink

I'm headin' out into shopping and street lanes where I'm only hearin' 'bout people gettin' shot and making claims that they can fix it

But they never deliver, I'm hangin' on by a sliver,
The only reason I'm alive is the hope I get from lies, I only listen to the sound of myself getting high in another world,
Another life where I have purpose, I don't deserve this, I'm stuffty service,
I get nervous and

I feel like I should die
'Cause the only time I feel alive
Is when I'm living in another life
Prisoner of my own device
And I'm walking on thin ice

yeah thats pretty forgetin gay discuss i guess


You have what appears to be a dynamite sound. But, I think it needs a little more cowbell.

Man if this was 2003, I would have guessed Linkin Park lyrics yo

Man if this was 2003, I would have guessed Linkin Park lyrics yo
i definitely got that vibe when typing it up haha
i did imagine it being sung in the style of cage the elephant's songs like in one ear or maybe a rap thing

if you'd thought this up 15 years ago, you'd be a rich man

if you'd thought this up 15 years ago, you'd be a rich man
stuff i need a time machine

How can you see into my eyes like open doors?

I'll thrash to this I guess.