Author Topic: shameless self-promotion (but give me feedback pls)  (Read 384 times)


The beginning synths aren't bad, but I don't think the kick drum fits. The 808 is nice, but I feel as if it could have a bit less saw to it. The drop was actually fun to listen to, but it kinda sounds a bit empty without some lower, more "boomy" bass. I got to 1:45 and it just sounds a bit repetitive until the second drop at 1:52. The second synth in the back kinda sounds like its random at times, it doesn't seem to fit in my opinion, it's kinda like they are fighting over who is the main synth at times. That's my solid feedback, if I were to rate it I would probably give it about 3/5 stars. It's not bad, but it could use some improvement. I like some of your other tracks like MOTIVE and Elevator Music. Good job, keep up the good work :)