Author Topic: Do you guys like my rap  (Read 751 times)

IM SO RICH IN ROBUX... YOU ARE RICH IN NO BUX
IM SO FREAKING COOL... I OWN FIVE FREAKING POOLS
YOUR A NOOB... NOTHING BUT A NOOB
AND YOUR HEAD LOOKS LIKE A FREAKING CUBE

yeah and im better than you
im better than you
stupid noob... nothing but a noob
im so cool i watch youtube
nothing but a noob nothing but a noob

yeah and i like minecraft.. i mine in the mineshaft yeah
i go to minecon every year
i bet you cant even hear
good raps, they dont just appear
they come out of minds like mine
and they wont disapeer

also... im in the hall of fame, and you
your in the hall of lame
im cool, so when you stare dont drool
and stay in school

my v-bucks are lit
and you dont even have a bit
im like a god with my squad
you look odd

all right im done roasting noobs
nothing but straight up noobs
they are bad
and im glad, they they have no bux and im glad i have robux... roasted and fuzz toasted

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« Last Edit: June 12, 2020, 12:19:35 PM by TableSalt »

fuzztoast it'd be a blessing if you hung yourself in your closet

Anyone got some constructive criticism?



did i just enter a time machine to 2010

Anyone got some constructive criticism?

yea. overall this is a pretty neat rap, but it has one major flaw: it was written. an easy thing to do to fix this is by highlighting the entire post, pressing backspace, and press the letters i, m, g, a, and y. then all you have to do from there is press post. ez