Author Topic: My first creation (Read 2291 times)

Lord Tony · May 03, 2008, 03:42:47 AM

This is my first creation please don't flame me this took less then 2 days to build,4367 bricks to make, and has over 6 rooms. Only 1 room is decorated at the moment ill post the other rooms as soon as thoose are decorated as well. This castle is not finished but im going to show what it looks now. feel free to rate it 1/10. Also if anyone knows a great color pattern for me that would be great.

Front of Castle

Aerial veiw

Throne room

Side veiw (looks same on other side)

Another aerial veiw

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captain blue · May 03, 2008, 07:17:52 AM

If it was a 5th or 6th build, 3/10

1st build, 8/10

Metalhed · May 03, 2008, 08:43:41 AM

Quote from: captain blue on May 03, 2008, 07:17:52 AM

1st build, 8/10

ynotdrol · May 03, 2008, 11:00:38 AM

compare this to most first builds its pretty good when you decide to update it add some more color and windows in the buildings.

7/10

Bisjac · May 03, 2008, 11:48:01 AM

Quote from: captain blue on May 03, 2008, 07:17:52 AM

If it was a 5th or 6th build, 3/10

1st build, 8/10

this is why i think its stupid to rate beginners.
like it matters how experienced he is, rating system shouldn't change,

save ratings for clan apps, not fun builds

Swholli · May 03, 2008, 11:59:43 AM

Though I agree with Bisjac, This is actually pretty good for a first time *released* build. So even if the ratings are wasted on the youth... if you get that pun... then I give this a nice little 7/10.

As for constructive critism, the only thing there is to say really, is it looks rather Mario 64ish, kinda bubbly, really fun looking. If you want it to be epic, give it realism detail. Thats about all I can say.

Mario Fan 11 · May 03, 2008, 12:39:20 PM

Great job for a first. 8.5/10

Lord Tony · May 03, 2008, 05:45:15 PM

Quote from: Swholli on May 03, 2008, 11:59:43 AM

Though I agree with Bisjac, This is actually pretty good for a first time *released* build. So even if the ratings are wasted on the youth... if you get that pun... then I give this a nice little 7/10.

As for constructive critism, the only thing there is to say really, is it looks rather Mario 64ish, kinda bubbly, really fun looking. If you want it to be epic, give it realism detail. Thats about all I can say.

how can i change it from looking like super mario 64ish building

but the good thing about this castle is it can stand for over 4 mins on a full scale zombie attack

Swholli · May 03, 2008, 06:32:54 PM

Quote from: Lord Tony on May 03, 2008, 05:45:15 PM

Quote from: Swholli on May 03, 2008, 11:59:43 AM
Though I agree with Bisjac, This is actually pretty good for a first time *released* build. So even if the ratings are wasted on the youth... if you get that pun... then I give this a nice little 7/10.

As for constructive critism, the only thing there is to say really, is it looks rather Mario 64ish, kinda bubbly, really fun looking. If you want it to be epic, give it realism detail. Thats about all I can say.

how can i change it from looking like super mario 64ish building

but the good thing about this castle is it can stand for over 4 mins on a full scale zombie attack

Well I'd say less roof and more siege tower. Maybe a little darker in color, and difference in shades of bricks to give it that 'it was new, now old' feel... if you got that, I meant make about every other brick alternating in color i.e one brick is an off white/gray where as two bricks or so away it's a darker gray. And if roofs are a must, make them darker as well.

Something in this nature is a perfect example of what I was saying: http://www.globalgeografia.com/sfondi/sirmione1024x768.jpg

And good for you about the Zombies. When Blockland Apocalypse comes, you'll be prepared.

Sgt. Rob · May 03, 2008, 08:41:25 PM

For a begginer this is great! 8/10

Roland · May 04, 2008, 05:13:47 AM

I was one some lab DM server and you were on it as well, and you loaded this castle. 8/10�

CapTMeaT · May 04, 2008, 11:02:30 AM

5/10. It's pretty good...

Lord Tony · May 04, 2008, 02:19:59 PM

Quote from: Roland on May 04, 2008, 05:13:47 AM

I was one some lab DM server and you were on it as well, and you loaded this castle. 8/10�

yea i loaded it into klays server i had to since i cant make my own server

Osak · May 04, 2008, 08:22:46 PM

This deserves a 9/10

Felix · May 04, 2008, 08:29:08 PM

i would like this if i could stop staring at your picture... *shiver*