It looks alright, can't quite see what the person is lookin' at on the monitor, but I imagine it's just because your avatar is a downscale of a larger picture, in which the monitor's contents would be visible. 7/10
Also, I think people are gonna rate mine crap, just something I whipped up in PDN in 30 seconds. It's not my fault the avatar size is smaller than on other forums, I'm used to 100x100.