my first model

[Burger]

im currently working on a gun this is my first model please tell me what i can change or add to it to make it better
top is old bottom is new(grip added)

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[Jervan]

When I'm modelling, I usually do two X and Z first, then when that's done, add Y details. It looks like you've done X and Z and only started Y.

Add some details to the faces (grip, bullet area, magazine sticking out a little etc)

[Burger]

thanks for the advice but with the xzy i use a difrent method ad i will add details

[Jervan]

Yeah that's what I mean, better :)

[FrAgGEr]

Well, first of all we already have a loving pistol, and more than enough other worthless guns.

Second, it's not THAT bad.

[Burger]

who said i was releasing it I was just seeing if i should give up modeling im going to make diffrent things

[chaseyqurt]

Is it really your First Model ? You have had to make other models or at least play around.

[Burger]

ok then ive made on crapy one i dont even consider a model its so bad so ok its my second y do u ask do u think it is good yes? no?

[chaseyqurt]

You have to count your first one... I don't really like it either.

[Burger]

ok well thanks for telling the truth anyway i need some flamming or it really wouldnt be my post.

or would it

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[Radial543]

I think thats it is pretty good side from the fact the the top of the gun doesn't look normal.

[FrAgGEr]

Also, the handle and the part that surrounds the trigger aren't supposed to be as wide as the rest of the gun.

[mike1337]

Good for your first model (8/10).