Again, change it up. Don't shoot the whole thing just watching the player or in first person view. Add more action to the scene. Make the titles legible. Turn off the JACT counter for forgets sake.
At first bl kept crashing and the jact counter would not go away :/ I will just disable it next time. The titles are perfect but, youtube makes them hard to read.
Edit: I also hate working with people because..
A. They don't know how to listen
B. They want to have some input on the film
C. They don't know how to act